| "Mikey B23's Hentai Story Collection" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Title: Mikey B23 says...
Reviewed By: Mikey B23 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 18:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Mikey B23 here!!!! Thanks for having faith in me!!! I have been busy with school and it has kept me off this fic, but I promise that I will get a new ch typed up for this fic after SonicX every Saturday!!! And...If you have ANY character submissions for me to add, just Email me at: Mikeyb882002@yahoo.com Simply give me a detailed bio of your character, and, before you know it, your character will be in one of the 99 ch I do!!!!! (Yes, im doin ANOTHER 99 ch fic!!!!!!)' Its just something I can do for all you faithful readers out there!!! Mikey B23 out!!!!!!!!.................
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Reviewed By: D Hell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 09:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Decided to update I see...Just don't write on a sugar rush, k?
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Reviewed By: Jiece18 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How do you come up with these pairings? Its a great bunch of stoires. Keep them coming!
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Reviewed By: Mr.E On: October 12, 2003 03:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
nice stuff, i wonder if Chris from Sonic X will get some action from Cream and Amy.....
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Reviewed By: D.J. the Hedgehog On: September 13, 2003 10:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Make more! |
Title: Hmmm
Reviewed By: nokiasama03@yahoo.com On: September 12, 2003 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad. Not too bad at all. BTW, your not going to let this story die off are ya?? If your not, add in more characters like Mina, Julie-su, or Remington! No one's written a lemon w/ him included, which I'm trying to work on one, but due to my shitty job * grumbles* Keep up the good work. BTW, what does kiu mean? |
Title: Ma???
Reviewed By: Sarama morgan On: September 07, 2003 12:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.o..............* drooling like the peverted celestial guaridna bad boy he is* Ma? Ma? Where's pa??? * falls in the well willingly* If this confuses you, just watch The Ring. Warning: You'll be terribly disturbed and might loose quite a bit of precious sleep. >;-) |
Title: SHUT UP FOR THE LOVE OF GOD
Reviewed By: GRAR On: September 06, 2003 13:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, this fic wouldn't be so bad if you SHUT THE BLOODY HELL UP AFTER EACH LINE.
God. |
Reviewed By: Shadow2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2003 22:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good collection of storys! |
Title: Needs (Chapter 1)
Reviewed By: Shannon Love (aka Queen Serenity18) On: August 30, 2003 14:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello.......uhmm........I LOVE CHAPTER ONE! IT'S EXCELLENT! Just reading about Sonic and Shadow fucking each other like that gets me HOT! O_o Okay, I shouldn't be talking like that, but anyway.....PLEASE write more Sonadow lemons! I LOVE SONADOW! Hentai and NON hentai, it's all yummy ^~^ |
Reviewed By: Sonadow freak! On: August 21, 2003 20:19 CDT
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um... i've read better... ALOT better... most of the pairings names are wrong. e.g.: somy = sonamy, tadow = shails, tonic = sails. just thought you should know... still... MUST READ ANYTHING WITH SHADOW IN IT!!!!! ARRRRRRRRGGGGGGHHHH!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: top-secret On: July 30, 2003 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd like to order(request)
1-sonic/tails
1-cream/tails/cheese
1-bunnie/sally
& 1-shadow/knuckles hold the mayo |
Reviewed By: NawtyDawg69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is your period key broken, or are you just obsessed with exclamation points? Also, quit interrupting your fics, I mean there is really no harm in an A/N here and there, but it gets annoying. Plus this is hardly twisted, evil, vile, or disgusting. |
Reviewed By: Yramesor Notfarc(correction) [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's quite a collection of lemon stories but there are still a few little combos that could have been written. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: D Hell [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would've given you more, but ten is the max...You listen to your readers, that's very good |
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