| "Mikey B23's Hentai Story Collection" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Title: Needs (Chapter 1)
Reviewed By: Shannon Love (aka Queen Serenity18) On: August 30, 2003 14:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello.......uhmm........I LOVE CHAPTER ONE! IT'S EXCELLENT! Just reading about Sonic and Shadow fucking each other like that gets me HOT! O_o Okay, I shouldn't be talking like that, but anyway.....PLEASE write more Sonadow lemons! I LOVE SONADOW! Hentai and NON hentai, it's all yummy ^~^ |
Reviewed By: Sonadow freak! On: August 21, 2003 20:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
um... i've read better... ALOT better... most of the pairings names are wrong. e.g.: somy = sonamy, tadow = shails, tonic = sails. just thought you should know... still... MUST READ ANYTHING WITH SHADOW IN IT!!!!! ARRRRRRRRGGGGGGHHHH!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: top-secret On: July 30, 2003 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd like to order(request)
1-sonic/tails
1-cream/tails/cheese
1-bunnie/sally
& 1-shadow/knuckles hold the mayo |
Reviewed By: NawtyDawg69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is your period key broken, or are you just obsessed with exclamation points? Also, quit interrupting your fics, I mean there is really no harm in an A/N here and there, but it gets annoying. Plus this is hardly twisted, evil, vile, or disgusting. |
Reviewed By: Yramesor Notfarc(correction) [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's quite a collection of lemon stories but there are still a few little combos that could have been written. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: D Hell [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would've given you more, but ten is the max...You listen to your readers, that's very good |
Reviewed By: Jiece18 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Dude, I bow to you. I don't know how you come up with this stuff, but its great. Keep it up please. |
Reviewed By: Another Lemon Writer On: July 12, 2003 18:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
If this is what you call twisted, "obsurd," sick, and vile, then I must assume you are very, very sheltered. |
Reviewed By: D Hell [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 13:46 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a great collection of hentai fics you got there...Only that each story is so short. You should make them longer. Not that you will, but still. |
Reviewed By: Mikey B23 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 20:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Mikey B23 here!!
The title of this review says it all!!
This series of hentai short stories are going to be "sick....twisted.....obsurd....disgusting.....vile....hehehehehehe..oh well....enjoy them!!" lemons!!!
Mikey B23 out!!!!!!............................ |
Reviewed By: Shadow2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 01:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
You do need to make it longer I understand that you don't like to get them but its just like one big cliffhanger. I like them there good don't take me wrong. |
Reviewed By: Shadow2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 01:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn your last chapter was hot!!!! |
Reviewed By: bani On: July 15, 2003 00:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hehehe. very.. nice.. lots of stories. :). anyway, great job and keep up the good work. please. :) |
Reviewed By: HentaiGuy100 On: July 15, 2003 14:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Spelling errors everywhere, as well as grammatical, the stories are way too short, but I like your enthusiasm to get straight to the point, if this is supposed to be, Quote,"sick.......twisted......obsurd.......disgusting........vile.....", then you really need to get out more... (by getting out more, I mean renting hardcore porno movies) |
Reviewed By: sonadow freak On: August 25, 2003 10:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
also soknux = sonuckles/sonux. these fics are too short and NOT as sick, twisted, or vile as some fics i read. for example, have you read 'Sonic kids Chronicles'??? also, your lemons have too little plot to call much of a lemon, its more PWP?! soz if this sounds like a flame, i have no intention of blaming the author for something i chose to read, but intend on giving an honest opinion. |
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