| "Mikey B23's Hentai Story Collection" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Title: good
Reviewed By: Kiyobi K [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
simple enough but... you know. good enough. heh heh bring more will ya?
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Title: mmmmmmm
Reviewed By: Cillaty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 14:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, usually i dont flame people, but this sucked! This junk is just plain horrible. Im sorry but sometimes you got hear the truth. GOD, that was bad! If you are like an 8 year old or something i could understand, but really dont think thats the case.
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Title: These are poorly done
Reviewed By: "The Red Mage" On: March 22, 2004 13:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, how do these make sense...they don't! Must be a bunch of 12 year olds that have never seen a sex scene that enjoy these...but I have to say... STOP DISGRACING SONIC! The lemons are as sour as the writer that came up with them! you have hit bottom barrel quality in representation of charcters! Here's a thought, make something worthwhile not 6 second quips that suck terribly! Repetitism, lack of originality, are just the beginning to this garbage! Here's a twink for the writer...you need to gain experience in proper writing and stop writing like a n00b!!!
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Title: Good!
Reviewed By: Darkstalker X [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2004 18:23 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS GOOD STUFF , BUT NOT SICK , ABSURD , DISGUSTING OR VILE FOR ME . I REALLY KNOW WHAT IM TALKING ABOUT CAUSE I`VE READ A LOT OF FANFICS LIKE THIS AND I AM A "GOURMET" READER, SO I SAY THIS IS VERY GOOD WORK. AND PLEASE PLEASE Do not write an Chris and Amy story cause i am already writing one AND I NEED SOMETHING ORIGINAL TO START WITH SO PLEASE DONT WRITE IT.
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Reviewed By: Brodstern On: March 02, 2004 20:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked most of them. (except for the yaoi. I don't like yaoi.) Anyways, I especially liked the Sonamy (Sonic/Amy), Rails (Rouge/Tails), and Chream (Cream/Chris) fics. Anyways, about the Chris/Cream fic, guess I'm not the only one that was inspired to create a fic of that pairing. My Chream fic isn't exactly hentai, but it's still a fic. Cool, man. Create another Chream fic or two, will ya? More Sonamy's too, and a few more Rails. One more thing, whatever happened to the pairing of Knuckles/Julie-Su? Put one of them on too. That's my rant. Good fics. Keep updating.
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Reviewed By: Mr.E On: November 23, 2003 02:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
straight from episode seven of Sonic X, that was sweet, maybe after he wakes up, Chris'll screw Amy
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Title: Mikey B23 says...
Reviewed By: Mikey B23 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 18:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Mikey B23 here!!!! Thanks for having faith in me!!! I have been busy with school and it has kept me off this fic, but I promise that I will get a new ch typed up for this fic after SonicX every Saturday!!! And...If you have ANY character submissions for me to add, just Email me at: Mikeyb882002@yahoo.com Simply give me a detailed bio of your character, and, before you know it, your character will be in one of the 99 ch I do!!!!! (Yes, im doin ANOTHER 99 ch fic!!!!!!)' Its just something I can do for all you faithful readers out there!!! Mikey B23 out!!!!!!!!.................
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Reviewed By: D Hell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 09:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Decided to update I see...Just don't write on a sugar rush, k?
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Reviewed By: Jiece18 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How do you come up with these pairings? Its a great bunch of stoires. Keep them coming!
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Reviewed By: Mr.E On: October 12, 2003 03:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
nice stuff, i wonder if Chris from Sonic X will get some action from Cream and Amy.....
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Reviewed By: D.J. the Hedgehog On: September 13, 2003 10:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Make more! |
Title: Hmmm
Reviewed By: nokiasama03@yahoo.com On: September 12, 2003 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad. Not too bad at all. BTW, your not going to let this story die off are ya?? If your not, add in more characters like Mina, Julie-su, or Remington! No one's written a lemon w/ him included, which I'm trying to work on one, but due to my shitty job * grumbles* Keep up the good work. BTW, what does kiu mean? |
Title: Ma???
Reviewed By: Sarama morgan On: September 07, 2003 12:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.o..............* drooling like the peverted celestial guaridna bad boy he is* Ma? Ma? Where's pa??? * falls in the well willingly* If this confuses you, just watch The Ring. Warning: You'll be terribly disturbed and might loose quite a bit of precious sleep. >;-) |
Title: SHUT UP FOR THE LOVE OF GOD
Reviewed By: GRAR On: September 06, 2003 13:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, this fic wouldn't be so bad if you SHUT THE BLOODY HELL UP AFTER EACH LINE.
God. |
Reviewed By: Shadow2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2003 22:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good collection of storys! |
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