| "Mikey B23's Hentai Story Collection" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: jetset6 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 15:58 CST
Comment/Review:
okay the way you keep talking in the parenthases is very annoying.
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Title: damn right
Reviewed By: TheRealScootTh [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2007 12:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn right we all need to slam our dicks in drawers after that good though good but we dont need the comments every 10 seconds but i liked and i quote '>SLAM< >SLAM< >SLAM<
>SLAM< >SLAM< >SLAM<
>SLAM< >SLAM< >CRUNCH< it made me chuckle you put yourself through immence and i mean immence pain/embarrisment to write a fic good on ya
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Title: Average
Reviewed By: CJ the Cheetah [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 05:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's okay I suppose. However, you do seem to jump straight to the sex instead of lead up to it slowly. People don't just go 'ZOMG I WUV U LETS HAVE SEX!'. You need to lead up to it slowly. Secondly, you put a lot of author notes in it which puts off a lot of people. We don't need to know 'this is sick' or 'i slammed my cock in the drawer'. Just write the fic, and it don't put author notes inbetween the story. Yet I still like it and it still made it to my faves. So, if you still do take requests, I've got three: Tails/Cosmo, Shadow/Blaze and Charmy/Cream/Bokkun. Hope you do them ^^
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Title: Just in case you didn't get my e-mail
Reviewed By: Shadowlover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2005 16:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great Story!!!!! Can I plz use Micheal in one of my stories? PLZ e-mail with your answer!!!!
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Reviewed By: sibs On: August 14, 2005 16:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT JOB. I like the last one most.
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Title: '___' indifferent!! : >
Reviewed By: sonicscrendude On: June 08, 2005 10:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
In all of my experance of writing reveiws, I have become jaded. (maybe its all the time spent reading pointless fanfictions that make no sense nor real point for originality.) but the one thing that never fails to shock amaze me is the sheer amount of horny fucks writing half assed porno on paper, trying to make something to masturbate to while getting recognition from their fellow perverts.Of corse, this guy is just making a unoriginal but just as perverted peice of shit that makes Chapelle look like Barny the dinosaur.I have nothing else to say exept that since I am a sonic junkie, it does not feel comfortable to me to see my favorite hedgehog getting violated by fan characters for the pleasure of the author and the local perverts who write all the (i loved this, it was cute) reveiws. and if one of you are reading this, (you know who you are>:( )you camt get anywhere by hatemailing me. it will only put you further in my mind into what you are. a really perverted fat nerd
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Title: -_-' I'm not going to bother with the title
Reviewed By: TwinBladeZero [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 20:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are Sick, Twisted, and basically INSANE!!! Nice job! I just want to request one single couple though... A Sonina (Sonic/Mina)! Great stories though! Ja Ne!
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Title: scarry
Reviewed By: the rad red can't be bothed to log in On: August 16, 2004 09:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
i dont think ive ever been so scared in mylife ...hahahahahahahaahhaa its hilarious
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Reviewed By: Some Dude [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 09:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Did you REALLY slam your cock in a drawer when you were writing this? That's... amusing, to say the least.
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Title: good
Reviewed By: Kiyobi K [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
simple enough but... you know. good enough. heh heh bring more will ya?
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Title: mmmmmmm
Reviewed By: Cillaty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 14:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, usually i dont flame people, but this sucked! This junk is just plain horrible. Im sorry but sometimes you got hear the truth. GOD, that was bad! If you are like an 8 year old or something i could understand, but really dont think thats the case.
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Title: These are poorly done
Reviewed By: "The Red Mage" On: March 22, 2004 13:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, how do these make sense...they don't! Must be a bunch of 12 year olds that have never seen a sex scene that enjoy these...but I have to say... STOP DISGRACING SONIC! The lemons are as sour as the writer that came up with them! you have hit bottom barrel quality in representation of charcters! Here's a thought, make something worthwhile not 6 second quips that suck terribly! Repetitism, lack of originality, are just the beginning to this garbage! Here's a twink for the writer...you need to gain experience in proper writing and stop writing like a n00b!!!
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Title: Good!
Reviewed By: Darkstalker X [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2004 18:23 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS GOOD STUFF , BUT NOT SICK , ABSURD , DISGUSTING OR VILE FOR ME . I REALLY KNOW WHAT IM TALKING ABOUT CAUSE I`VE READ A LOT OF FANFICS LIKE THIS AND I AM A "GOURMET" READER, SO I SAY THIS IS VERY GOOD WORK. AND PLEASE PLEASE Do not write an Chris and Amy story cause i am already writing one AND I NEED SOMETHING ORIGINAL TO START WITH SO PLEASE DONT WRITE IT.
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Reviewed By: Brodstern On: March 02, 2004 20:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked most of them. (except for the yaoi. I don't like yaoi.) Anyways, I especially liked the Sonamy (Sonic/Amy), Rails (Rouge/Tails), and Chream (Cream/Chris) fics. Anyways, about the Chris/Cream fic, guess I'm not the only one that was inspired to create a fic of that pairing. My Chream fic isn't exactly hentai, but it's still a fic. Cool, man. Create another Chream fic or two, will ya? More Sonamy's too, and a few more Rails. One more thing, whatever happened to the pairing of Knuckles/Julie-Su? Put one of them on too. That's my rant. Good fics. Keep updating.
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Reviewed By: Mr.E On: November 23, 2003 02:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
straight from episode seven of Sonic X, that was sweet, maybe after he wakes up, Chris'll screw Amy
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