| "Shinigami's Lover III" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Title: Loving it. Small nitpick
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 17:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent ongoing story arc. I really love knocking around in this world. One little nitpick that's driving me nuts though. Calvary. Calvary is the hill where Jesus got nailed. The cavalry comes over the hill to save people at the last moment. Just thought I'd mention it, since you use it a lot.
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Reviewed By: Destiny's Lot [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2004 01:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't wait to read the next one. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: December 24, 2003 23:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job this was so sweet.. ttfn Merry Christmas
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2003 10:41 CST
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Okay, I don't do this often but - *melts into a puddle of goo*. Aw that was sweet and well thought out! I liked the way you made Heero into a bit of a poet in the whole Shinigami series, it's an interesting twist on the canon and you make it credible. Merry Christmas!
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: November 12, 2003 22:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's excellent. Congratulations. I hope read more of you.
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Reviewed By: 'lil debbie On: November 08, 2003 20:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i want you to know, my heart stopped when I read the last sentence the word End was extremelly traumatizing!! But, once again, you have created a masterpiece, I bow to a master.
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 14:39 CST
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That was just such a perfect ending, wrapping up the loose ends as well as their feelings, and some really funny moments. What a fantastic story, thanks for letting us read it. I'll be keeping my eyes peeled for the next one in the series!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: November 08, 2003 13:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool ending, I think Wufei needs a love interest or my be someone close to them gets kidnapped in the next story well I don't know .. But what I do know is I can't wait until the next story so until then TTFN You keep writing I'll keep reading
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: October 23, 2003 14:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really good update.. And this story is comming along so good. This story gets better and better with with every chapter you post.. I look forward to reading every chapter and can't wait until the next update so update again soon thanks. TTFN
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 11:55 CDT
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I've finally caught up on my reading :) Great story so far (yes, I realize it's almost over), and a great addition to the Shinigami's lover series! It was great to see Duo get a chance at being the anchor instead of the wild canon, and Heero needing his help. I'm looking forward to the next chapter with great anticipation!
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Title: OK
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: October 12, 2003 15:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know what to say.. Except anll your stories are great and I look forward to read each and every one of them.So if you keep writeing I'll keep reading TTFN
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Reviewed By: SeYa On: July 26, 2003 08:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As usual your writing is fantastic I really enjoy your stories. This is excellent work. I'm desperately waiting to find out what happens next. |
Reviewed By: Duo no Baka & Baka Yarou On: July 22, 2003 15:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GIVE US MORE
( and read our fics please! |
Reviewed By: Dyna On: July 22, 2003 00:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Of course Heero will say yes, I can feel the action, adventure and angst building already. *Rubs hands together in anticipation* Boy, you got this one out fast, now all we need is a chapter of Soldier Boys to make this week complete. |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 21:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another Great chapter ...It seems likem forever since you updated ...^-~ I hope the next update doesent take so long because I love to read your work !!!I hope to read more from you soon... |
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