| "The Hot Box" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 19:42 CST
Comment/Review:
this was good, i would love to find out how hatori and tohru's relationship progresses as they're my favorite fruits basket couple
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Reviewed By: _luv_naraku_ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 13:48 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hahaha Hatori made Shigure walk up 25 flights of stairs. LOL. it was a good fic, but i saw two grammer errors. you put "his" instead of "this". but other than that, it was good.
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Reviewed By: Manga Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 23:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should write a follow up to this. Poor Shi-chan! He'll be sore for weeks!
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Title: The Hot Box
Reviewed By: shadow_of_the_shades [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 15:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol. Hatori got his revenge on Shigure heeheehee. Very good. Gee...I can only imagine what happened after that with Hatori and Thohru. This was the first Tohru/Hatori fic that I've read. It was very good. Things started out innocent then developed. WRITE MORE STORIES!! ^-^
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Reviewed By: AyameLover#? On: November 09, 2004 20:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Clever -- I liked it. Keep up the good work!!!
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Reviewed By: shadowslayerprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's good
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