| "Circle of Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Satsukiyami On: February 13, 2004 17:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story would be great if not for the grammer mistakes. Spell checker attempts to correct spelling (even then it can give the wrong word) not grammer. It always does good to reread your story after a few days or have someone else beta it for you. That and you aren't always clear on somethings. The story's great otherwise and I can't wait for the next chapter. At first I was even assuming this story to be an odd Alucard/Omi fic. You never know. I once found a story that was Alucard/Oburi from 'Kite.' Keep up the good work. This isn't a flame, just constructive, truthful criticism.
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Reviewed By: EvilCacklingHippyOverlord On: January 04, 2004 20:24 CST
Comment/Review:
What.. interesting.. things Omi keeps under his bed *grin* I enjoyed the interlude(whee Schwarz~) and await the next segment.
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Title: Yess~
Reviewed By: EvilCacklingHippyOverlord On: December 08, 2003 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Enjoyment Factor: 10+ *dark/bloody/vampish fetish side is thoroughly sated with this chappy* Aa.. you make me so happy here, 'tis worth the wait, I applaud you. Ye would get a high score for the bloody violence alone, but earned yourself a 10 from me for the factor of Farfarello being there and getting to play with the Kitten as well~ *much Irish Berserker love* ECHO~ *gives much digitized Pocky for the chapter*
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Title: More Damn you!
Reviewed By: brina On: October 11, 2003 19:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic. Its full of such interesting plot twist and very original. Update soon. I look forward to the next chapter. MistressCoCoLoVeR
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Title: finally...
Reviewed By: PyroBaka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2003 14:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you, I fanlly find a Hellsing/Weiss Kreuz crossover!!! Write more please!
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Reviewed By: Darcey On: October 02, 2003 00:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
yummy omi! can't wait for the next chapter ^^
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Reviewed By: Snowshoe koneko On: July 29, 2003 16:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!! This is just..... SUGOI !!!! Please hurry and write the next chappie! What's gonna happen to Omi???? Oh... um could you try and e-mail me when the next chappies are up? I'm bdanie687@yahoo.com, or just email me for lack of anything better to do! ^-^ Keep writing! |
Reviewed By: EvilCacklingHippyOverlord On: July 10, 2003 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
*claps* Very nice. I find a WK/Hellsing crossover very intriguing, and do wonder just why everyone seems to be keeping their eyes on Omi. *she idly wonders if Alucard will have himself another wide eyed fledgling on his hands* |
