| "My Light, Your Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: RedEyeDragon2478 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 20:09 CDT
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bring on the sequal! |
Reviewed By: cerridwen On: July 26, 2003 11:10 CDT
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That was...weird, to say the least. Wasn't expecting that ending at all. So in the sequel you're gonna resurrect Yami and Yugi or what? Well, looking forward to it! Like I said..weird, but good. I like your writing style. Simple and easy to read. Good job! |
Reviewed By: Melvin On: July 25, 2003 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
eww... the yoia bits were icky...
couldn't anzu just rape yami and yugi instead of going around dismembering people?
that's what misty did to ash when he dumped her in the pokemon fic, "can't accept" |
Reviewed By: dark On: July 22, 2003 15:00 CDT
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is this going somewhere and is anzu going to dye soon? |
Reviewed By: RedEyeDragon2478 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 19:39 CDT
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it does keep getting better every chapter! I support this fic all the way! keep at it! |
Reviewed By: fairette On: July 17, 2003 13:29 CDT
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ohhhh! I can't wait to see what Anzu is going to do at the party. ( I hate that biotch) How gruesome for her to kill her own parents, cut off their heads and put their body parts in the sink disposuer (sp?) *shivers* yuck! I like this fic and hope you had planned on continuing. |
Reviewed By: fairette On: July 14, 2003 11:13 CDT
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Oooooo! poison lollie pop, didn't notice at first. I hope yugi doesn' die. But I would like to find out in your next update that will be coming to mediaminer soon. thankies ^___^! |
Reviewed By: Catsy & Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2003 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Catsy: I LOVE U!!!!! But not in that kind of way... I love ur mind 4 coming up with this FICCIE!!!! kill the bitch, kill the bitch, kill her!!!!!!! Angel:Catsy calm down! 4 kami's sake! nice fic u got going here Violet Eyes and Kuribo-chan, but put lots of Yugi/Yami fluff, and kill Tea off... Everyone: KILL TEA! SHE IS THE WHORE OF ALL WHORES!!!!!KILL TEA FOR SHE IS A MOTHER FUCKING BITCH!!!*chant song over and over* Catsy: Please continue on with this fic, cause it is so wonderful!!!!all tea haters out there would love this fic, actually i think I will go spread the word! *runs off to spread word about, "My Light, Your Darkness". Angel:Please update this ficcie soon! anyways gotta go help Catsy spread the word about this Later. *runs off to spread word about this fic* Everyone: We LUV Kuribo-chan! We LUV Violet Eyes! We LUV Zoids Angel!!! WE WANT THEM TO KILL OFF TEA, FOR SHE IS A WHORE,and A BITCH!!!! WE hate her guts!!! WILL SHE EVER Go Insane!!!!! WE HOPE SO!!!!! WE LUV KURIBO-CHAN AND VIOLET EYES AND ZOIDS ANGEL!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: fairette On: July 12, 2003 09:42 CDT
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Heyyyyyyyyy! You updated U.U thank you Loving the story, and the way you discribe Anzu's laugh as a cackle-ewww, not attractive. Hope your planning on continuing. ^___^! |
Reviewed By: Yaisa On: July 12, 2003 05:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He he... i was wondering when Anzu was gonna go insane, after about a year of all those friendship speeches she must have fancied a change Great story though, i havn't read a ravenge fic yet, so it was different, although everybody seems to have Yugi and Yami doing... somthing together lol! You shud write some more ones wit Anzu going criminally insane, it's funny lol. anyway, Great story! 10 outta 10! Byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! Yaisi! go away, i'm trying to- Yaisi!!- '...' |
Reviewed By: fairette On: July 11, 2003 15:05 CDT
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*bouncing in seat with overload of zealous* Ooooooooooooo! so good, and it has barely begun. Just one thing though, make sure there's plenty of Tea/Anzu bashing and lots of Yugi/Yami fluff, slash, lemon, ect.(you get the point) anything to put that tramp in her place (God I hate her and her stupid absection with friendship- too much love) Anyway, I hope you update soon. |
Reviewed By: RedEyeDragon2478 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 08:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kill the bitch,kill the bicth!!!!! make sure tea dies a gruesome death, AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!! you have talent! the haters of Tea would love this. I need you to update more though, seems so cool! |
Reviewed By: cece On: July 15, 2003 10:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mwahahaha! die suckers!!! hehehehe!!! > |
Reviewed By: RedEyeDragon2478 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 11:54 CDT
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you've done so well *sniff* I'm so proud. you alomst have as many visits as my fic. opps, well don't stop. Ionly stopped cause I ran out of ideas for now. |
Reviewed By: iloveyugi On: July 15, 2003 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAH KILL TEA AND MI TO KILL THE ASS HOLES KILLLLL THEMMMM MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAH sorry I JUST LOVE YUGI HE LOVES ME TOOOOOO |
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