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| "The Lightening Assassin" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 00:32 CST
Comment/Review:
short but sweet, this was a good story. or it might just be that it had some awesome fight scenes, and a fair storyline. I think that Naraku might not be a bad idea to include in a sequel...and it might be kinda interesting to make it so that rin either is stronger than seshoumaru, or becomes stronger than him. i just like those kinds of things. this was a good story. have fun and good luck with the sequel
| Reviewed By: kikyo569 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 21:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a way kool fics so could you pleaseee update it before i have to fluffy after you |
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