| "I Only Have Eyes for You" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: NSBVEGE On: September 01, 2003 00:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CLIFYYY!!!!!!! BAD GODDAMN IT I LIKE NO LOVE THIS FUCKING FIICCC UPDATEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE IM DYING!!! VEGETA IS PERFECT!!! SO LIKE HIM HE's SUCH A SEXY BASTARD YUMYUM!!!!
UPDATE SOON AND MORE LEMONY GOODNESS!!!
LATER |
Reviewed By: Fryjia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2003 19:24 EDT
Comment/Review:
write write i tell you !!!!! sorry i love the story and you need to keep at it its great! |
Reviewed By: Zerianyu On: July 30, 2003 01:16 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hey
I love the story lots. You have a lot of missing words. For example. He walked down the toward her room. You also have a lot of words mixed up. Example She's beautiful so. I just wanted to point that out. I really like the story lots. I hope you post soon. Please don't take this as a flame. I am just trying to help. |
Reviewed By: Laina On: July 23, 2003 09:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this chapter!! Please update really soon I want to see what in the box!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: yusukelover02 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 14:38 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this is a great fic! can't wait till the next chapter! update soon! please! |
Reviewed By: Gaby On: July 15, 2003 18:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!!!!!! please update as soon as possible. What will vegeta do next? it is so interesting!!!! |
Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 18:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very good...different from all the other v/b get togethers i've read. Keep on going!! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2003 12:51 EDT
Comment/Review:
Very nice... I am looking forward to the next update. |
Reviewed By: Princess_of_Fantasy On: July 11, 2003 23:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great potential. But I think that they should get a little bit more, softer. You know like Vegeta maybe acting a little bit less like a tough
guy and more like a father. Bulma then might stop
ignoring him so much. She might start to think this relationship will work. |
Reviewed By: yoOS n0 iSh mai On: July 11, 2003 23:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
daym...poor bulma... why don't she juz fuck him already???lolz its a good storie!!! luv ish... kepe ryting... |
Reviewed By: outtadaloop On: July 11, 2003 20:03 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been following this fic on ff.net but I'll show some support here~ update soon plz! |
Reviewed By: Laina On: July 11, 2003 16:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I already wrote a comment but just incase it didn't get through I'm writing anouther one. Please update really soon I love it, its really is one of the best!!!! |
Reviewed By: Laina On: July 11, 2003 16:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update, I really, really, really LOVE this fic, I'M BEGGING YOU PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Loulou On: July 11, 2003 12:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the way this story is headed. Chapter 2 was a little short but that's ok. You story has potential. Keep at it... |
Reviewed By: Kat On: July 22, 2003 18:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting...very interesting |
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