| "I Only Have Eyes for You" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: marlene_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2011 13:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it ! Your vegeta is one of the most simillar to the anime... and that´s amazing! i love how the story is developing. So natural, so fast and so great :D Thank you! It´s a great fic, very different to another ones and it has some great scenes |
Reviewed By: free-sprit - to lazy On: August 19, 2005 08:09 EDT
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Oh yeah, just one other hting, what is your native language anyway? Mine's danish, I've been speaking english for like 4 years or something.. oh well, whatever.
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Reviewed By: ree-sprit - to lazy to log in On: August 19, 2005 08:05 EDT
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aaaaaw! Nice nice nice! I loved it! And yes, Vegeta is actually gonna kill himself for Bulma, and Trunks. Like we all didn't knew that. :P You should make a sequal? Please? pretty please? You're a very talented writer. love this story, keep it up. byeye
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Reviewed By: Winged_Isis [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 14:50 EDT
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Wow! I really did enjoy reading your fic! And that was a great idea for what happened in these famous (or infamous?) three years! I don't believe in the "they fell in love and decided to have a baby"-theory either. Oh, yes, you should have given Vegeta a little duck to play with in that bathtub-scene in Chapter...uhmm...4? Or was it 5? *shrug* That'd been just too sweet! *giggle* I think you did a great job in explaining and showing the characters' feelings and emotions, and so their actions and intentions during the fic are made really plausible. So, my opinion: Great story! Keep going! PS.: And I really did like Trunks. He was just so cute! ^.^
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Reviewed By: ani_girl7789 On: September 03, 2004 01:11 EDT
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^_^ thats a really cool ending... now that the fic is over, i have nothing else to read... well, ive got 30 other fics, but some of them rnt updated... im glad u ended the fic... maybe a sequel??? i doubt, but i can always hope, ne??? good job!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 14:56 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon. I really like the way this story is coming along. The plot if wonderful.
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Reviewed By: mona On: October 12, 2003 16:07 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i know no one admit this but i read ur story more than once. THE STORY'S GREAT!!!!!! WOW!!! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!!
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Reviewed By: kuramaandkarasu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2003 17:07 EDT
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update soon! i wanna see what happens next... not literally of course... *sweatdrops* |
Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2003 23:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As usual, very good chapter. This story just keeps getting more and more interesting. Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGE On: September 01, 2003 00:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CLIFYYY!!!!!!! BAD GODDAMN IT I LIKE NO LOVE THIS FUCKING FIICCC UPDATEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE IM DYING!!! VEGETA IS PERFECT!!! SO LIKE HIM HE's SUCH A SEXY BASTARD YUMYUM!!!!
UPDATE SOON AND MORE LEMONY GOODNESS!!!
LATER |
Reviewed By: Fryjia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2003 19:24 EDT
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write write i tell you !!!!! sorry i love the story and you need to keep at it its great! |
Reviewed By: Zerianyu On: July 30, 2003 01:16 EDT
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Hey
I love the story lots. You have a lot of missing words. For example. He walked down the toward her room. You also have a lot of words mixed up. Example She's beautiful so. I just wanted to point that out. I really like the story lots. I hope you post soon. Please don't take this as a flame. I am just trying to help. |
Reviewed By: Laina On: July 23, 2003 09:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this chapter!! Please update really soon I want to see what in the box!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: yusukelover02 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 14:38 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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this is a great fic! can't wait till the next chapter! update soon! please! |
Reviewed By: Gaby On: July 15, 2003 18:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!!!!!! please update as soon as possible. What will vegeta do next? it is so interesting!!!! |
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