| "Enter Ceridwen" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: stix On: July 27, 2005 09:01 CDT
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i loved this story. it was great. please add more to this story soon.
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: MidniteStar On: November 17, 2003 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Eirw. Its Britney From language! Ur realli good i didnt get to read all of it yet..but looks really nice btw something i actually understand!lol..Well keep up the outstanding writin! Havent got to the graphic scene on the one yet...:PBye! Britney aka MidniteStar
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Reviewed By: animelove [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 19:37 CST
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i love your stories.... i'm kinda sad 'cause hiei was well...dumped. But i don't think that a girl in their right mind would dump hiei, right? i mean he's the best looking guy on the show! (the part about the girl in their right minds, i'm NOT dissing your character or you ok? so don't take it badly.) LOVE THE STORY! MUST HAVE MORE!
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel On: July 21, 2003 00:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ur writing and grammar was fairly good. you were very creative. i really injoyed reading this. i would like to read about number 3. I can't wait for ur new fic. keep up the good work*_-!! |
Reviewed By: LAiN On: July 19, 2003 21:04 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think number 3. You added more discription to that one than the rest thats why i think you like that one the most. Pick which ever one you want to do tho.
#3 #3 #3 #3 #3 #3 #3 #3 #3 #3 #3 #3 #3 #3 #3 #3 #3
Ja Ne
-LAiN |
Reviewed By: dalegal333 On: July 18, 2003 22:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i realy like an fanfic with hiei but this one was realy good plze make #3 |
Reviewed By: Kiya [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a great fic you wrote, keep it up ^ ^ |
Reviewed By: dark fire On: July 12, 2003 19:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv your fic plz,plz,plz,plz,plz,plz,plz,ppppllllzzzz write more!!!!!!!i beg of you plz!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Yendtra On: July 12, 2003 15:04 CDT
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Your writin gis great that is supposed to be your writing is great. Sorry about that. |
Reviewed By: Yendtra On: July 12, 2003 15:03 CDT
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Love it just simply love it!!! Your chapters are of great size, you explain things to the understanding of how they feel. Your writin gis great! And it has Hiei!!! Ah I love Hiei. Keep it going it is just right.
Though, there is one little problem if you are to go by Kuwbara's (have no clue how to spell his name.) Code. One of his codes is to not fight women and well the whole code thing with her kind of fell down. Not to be a bother of that or anything It's just something I'd like to point out...don't hurt me.
Bye... Can't wait till the next chapter. |
