| "Inuyasha gets a bath" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: dragongirl101 On: December 13, 2003 11:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was great. it keep me on the edge of my seat. please write more to this chapter about Inu/Kag baby girl and what happens to her and Sess/Laryn to future to be child.
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Reviewed By: darkangelfirekitty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 18:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^0ops forgot ^_~
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Reviewed By: darkangelfirekitty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 18:36 CST
Comment/Review:
grate fic i must say but fluffy RAPED kagome ...not good! inuyasha should have kicked that sobs ass .. as said by ..*looks up*: Yumiki-chan... and kagome still likeing him..crazy but it was still really great ..moew ^_~
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2003 10:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very cute story up-date soon =)
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Title: *frown**glare**mad*
Reviewed By: ?????????????? On: October 01, 2003 20:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU ARE AN EVIL AUTHOR!!!!!! First,Kagome met Seshoumaru in early episodes. Second,Seshoumaru despises ALL humans! Last, Seshoumaru is NOT a man-whore. As previously stated, YOU ARE AN EVIL AUTHOR,you imbecile.
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Title: *frown**glare**mad*
Reviewed By: ?????????????? On: October 01, 2003 20:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU ARE AN EVIL AUTHOR!!!!!! First,Kagome met Seshoumaru in early episodes. Second,Seshoumaru despises ALL humans! Last, Seshoumaru is NOT a man-whore. As previously stated, YOU ARE AN EVIL AUTHOR,you imbecile.
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Reviewed By: Yumiki-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 10:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice story, ecpt, hmmmmm... what was it? OH YEAH! Fulffy RAPED Kagome! I hope you have InuYasha Kick that S.O.B.'s ASS! But other wise good story! I hope you up-date soon so you con have InuYasha kick Fluffy's ASS!
Thax, Yumiki-chan |
Reviewed By: Julie K. On: July 23, 2003 10:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not too bad of a story! You started out with a very cute concept of Inuyasha getting a bath. Great lemon material. I was really just expecting it to be a PWP. You're not doing to bad a job of turning it into a more serious fic. The characters do seem a bit out of character though. You could also use a bit more description. I think things jump around too fast. It's nice to have the action move right along, but if it goes to fast it becomes hard to read or unrealistic. Also you're dialogue sequences are hard to follow. Watch your spacing and formatting of lines. It'll make it easier to understand who said which line. That aside; I really did enjoy it. It's fun, exciting and a bit quirky. I hope you post more soon! I'd love to see what happens. Oh... make the lemons longer! That's the best part! ^__^ |
Reviewed By: chuNKy LuVER On: July 15, 2003 02:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ITs Great But it ended So fast. And PUPs? Already? In a Couple of Months? |
Reviewed By: kityasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 02:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
make more please? good job mate... no no not like that kind of mate in this story hehe don't mind me i'm a little hyper and i become....creeepy |
Reviewed By: Mikey B23 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 00:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Mikey B23 here!!!
Wow! Very nice work on this lemon! I can see this was prepared and well thought out! Extremly enjoyable and I LOVE the pairing! KIU, I look forward to reading more of your works!
Mikey B23 out!!!!!!!!!.................... |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2003 21:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
The formatting makes this piece very hard to read. A lot of people will see that it's all one paragraph and then discard it. Perhaps re-uploading it as a different kind of document would fix the problem.
I don't know if Inuyasha would be that articulate about his feelings even once he'd decided to express them. And the jump from thinking about each other to thinking about a baby is a bit jarring.
Old subject matter, but the style and images are pretty good. |
Reviewed By: Kanpeki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2003 07:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a very good fic. Grammar was a bit off and the idea has been done before but all in all it was great. |
Reviewed By: Guns On: July 12, 2003 05:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please Write more. This is too good not to continue. Well if you don't i will just have to imagine what would happen....scary thought. This was a good fic and i hope you continue to write |
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru the Fallen Angel On: July 12, 2003 04:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep writing! How does it turn out? |
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