| "Kagome's Spirit Detective Cousin" Reviews/Comments [ 98 ] |
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Reviewed By: Cresent moon 22000 On: October 29, 2003 14:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOOOOON K
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Reviewed By: i_luv_sesshoumaru On: October 24, 2003 15:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
i think this story should be a hiei/kagome please update soon
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Title: please keep writing
Reviewed By: kuramalove_200 On: October 20, 2003 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
because you keep misspelling yusuke.please keep writing fics i like yours the best p.s.i don't make inuyasha a jeaolus type. p.s.s DON'T WRITE ANY YAOIS THEY MAKE ME SICK
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 02:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
I want it to be hiei/kagome. I think your story is good but you need get someone to edit it. If you like you could send it to me and I could do it for you. You know kind of like a prof reader or something. Well let me know my email is bloodbunny49@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: KitsuneLover On: October 17, 2003 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, i like your fic. It's good but it needs more action. I vote for Inuyasha/Kagome pairing. I also vote that you should continue this fic. Keep writing! Thanks
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Reviewed By: Dark Silver On: October 16, 2003 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLZ UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOON OOOOOOOOKKKK
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Reviewed By: ScottishFae [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 01:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is really good, I like it a lot. YYH/IY crossovers are some of my favorites and yet all of them tend to have the same pairings: Kurama and Kagome, which I have NO problem with but just to mix things up why not go away from the usual with a Hiei/Kagome pairing. As long as its not Kuwabara (he pisses me off a lot) and Kagome I"m great though! Keep up the excellent work and I hope you update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Blue cresent moon On: October 14, 2003 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Vote for Hiei/Kagome because Hiei stood up for Kagome when inu called here a slut.Thats why there better together.....^-^
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Title: Beta reading
Reviewed By: Zhare On: October 12, 2003 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good fic, even if I have seen others like it. My opinion on couples is that when there is a Inu/YYH crossover Kagome should be put with Kurama. Also I would like to offer my services as a beta reader. If you don't know what a beta reader is; a beta is someone who reads over your story before you post it, and corrects spelling and grammer mistakes, and also gives advice conserning plot holes and ways to maybe make your fic better (such as pointing out if they think a certain scene should have gone a different way). Please e-mail me, as soon as you can, at dragon16@wcnet.org and tell me whether or not you want to accept my offer. If you do, please send me the next chapter of your story when it is finished and I will get to it as soon as I can. Zhare P.S. Please do not send it in an attachment as I have had problems with them in the past.
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Title: dranged fanfic lover
Reviewed By: debbie the rex On: October 11, 2003 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me liky.Inu/kag pleaqse
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Reviewed By: maibe On: October 11, 2003 14:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUDE! it wdas like, WOW! Sooo, dude, the story is great, but the organization sucks! It makes me confused! I love the story, but i was dizzy while i was reading this *I have flu right now* but it kick BIG BAD ASS! So, you'ar a kool writer, but your presentation ruins critiques. Dude, i just have to write it agai, you're way good. By the way, i agree with inu and K action, but make Inu green with Hiei. Or maybe 5 guys after kagome, -the deamon, Hiei, Kouga, Naraku, -and of course, Inu! But, keeping on mind K and Inu true and decerving romance.
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Reviewed By: maibe On: October 11, 2003 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUDE! it wdas like, WOW! Sooo, dude, the story is great, but the organization sucks! It makes me confused! I love the story, but i was dizzy while i was reading this *I have flu right now* but it kick BIG BAD ASS! So, you'ar a kool writer, but your presentation ruins critiques. Dude, i just have to write it agai, you're way good.
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Reviewed By: Tiger_Blaze On: October 11, 2003 02:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi there! I'm really enjoying this fic. I just wanted to drop you a line to tell you that. I also wanted to let you know that it looks like your fic is leaning towards a Hiei/Kagome pairing rather than an Inuyasha/Kagome pairing. Maybe it'll turn into a Hiei/Kagome/Inuyasha love triangle? G2g TTFN ^_^
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Title: Yeah you updated!!
Reviewed By: SaiyanPrincessSesshysgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2003 01:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can it be a Hiei/Kagome? I'm always reading I/K, I need something new, PLEASE!?!?!?!?!? YOU ROCK!!!!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 21:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
[heie/kagome] i was a good chap. please update soon thanks
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