| "Kagome's Spirit Detective Cousin" Reviews/Comments [ 98 ] |
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Reviewed By: reneea On: July 12, 2003 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are soooooooo evil! I thought it was a new chapter.I really love this fic. so update SOON please |
Reviewed By: AnimeGirl On: July 12, 2003 17:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
The story is interesting and good so far! Please update soon. But can you put quotation marks when someone is talking, is kind of confusing without it. |
Reviewed By: Midnight Fox [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2003 14:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please continue.
It is very good.
Midnight Fox |
Reviewed By: Yendtra On: July 12, 2003 14:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Me agian, I forgot to ask if you could put the "talky marks" so that it could be less confusing when another character starts a conversation. |
Reviewed By: Yendtra On: July 12, 2003 14:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
The story is going great and you better (not to sound bossy) get the next one up, I like it that much. Wow! Oh and not to be mean or anything but I only noticed this once so maybe is was just once, but Heie isn't spelled like that, it's Hiei. Sorry fav character, you know how people can get when it comes to there fav character. But to make you feel better It was GREAT and I can't wait for the next one. You're a good writer keep it up. Till the next chapter....
Bye
P.S. try to make the chapters longer, if that wouldn't be to much of a bother. |
Reviewed By: bise b On: July 12, 2003 13:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, good fic. i like it. just a few comments. the chapters should be longer and also when someone is talking you should put what they say inside of quotations. ex: "Hey Kagome. How are you?"said Sango ok? and thoughts should be inside of apostrofies. ex: 'wow, her smile is making my heart beat so fast...' thought heie. ok? you get it? its just kinda confusing. alright? bye bye |
Reviewed By: TheOneACR On: July 12, 2003 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far the three chapters are great. I love reading fanfics. Inuyasha and YuyuHakasho are my favorite animes. So this is really interesting. Please keep on, besides it's summer so have plenty of time to write. All in all, it was superb,so please keep writing. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Serene On: July 12, 2003 11:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story so far. But can put " " wen theres dialogues? It's really confusing to read without them when someone talks. It would be cool if used them.
Update real soon. |
Reviewed By: Paws [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2003 10:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
*grins* Is Inu-chan EVER going to be surprised and so is Kagome's Cuz! *laughs* Will he just Yell at her as usual or actually argue with Kag-chan's cuz and his friends? This looks to be intresting confrontation! |
Reviewed By: Paws [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2003 10:06 CDT
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Ok, I'm sorry but I'm not familier with the other anime you're crossing with. So anything that may seem OOC for them is well irrelavant to me! *grins* So hope you get many more reviews. |
Reviewed By: Paws [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2003 09:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Short, but ok. Can you please use " marks when you get the characters to talk? It'd make it much easier to understand. Thanks. |
Reviewed By: DannyKen23 On: July 12, 2003 08:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!Please update soon |
Reviewed By: Cappy On: July 12, 2003 13:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a totally super duper great story. Keep up the great work. You put two awsome animes together, which make it great to read and enjoy. please finish. Thanks. |
Reviewed By: S1Cherry [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2003 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i really like it! i wanna know how inu yasha will react, it'll probablybe funny. keep writing this story, and could you up date asap? please? |
Reviewed By: me On: August 07, 2003 11:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update please |
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