| "Kagome's Spirit Detective Cousin" Reviews/Comments [ 98 ] |
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Reviewed By: PUT UP A NEW CAPTER ALL REDY On: August 01, 2003 02:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
PUT THE NEXT D*MM CHAPTER UP ALREDY !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i usto rate this a 10 out of 10 story now 2 out of 10
sorry tipo last time =p |
Reviewed By: PUT UP A NEW CAPTER ALL REDY On: August 01, 2003 02:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
PUT THE NEXT D*MM CHAPTER UP ALREDY !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i usto rate this a 10 out of 10 story now 2 out of 10 |
Reviewed By: Sumechick15 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 14:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
I've waited so long for a new chapter. Pleaz hurry with a new chapter. I'm addicted to your story so please hurry up!!
Sume |
Reviewed By: KK On: July 26, 2003 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
more soon |
Reviewed By: ann On: July 25, 2003 17:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
i have seen why you have not put quotation marks in the story so maybe instead you could put the little ** marks when someone is talking. love the story please update soon. |
Reviewed By: HArdCandyVegetto On: July 23, 2003 17:44 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
i'd like to read your story, but it's all one long sentence and it gives me a headache even trying. I can tell you now countless people are bypassing you because of this. is it so hard to format? please fix this so people can appreciate your work. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Anime Nut On: July 18, 2003 23:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
*falls over anime style* Way to leave a person hanging. You have a good thing going here, however, I'm not trying to be meen here, but I think you better get someone to read these over before you post them. There are quite a few mistakes in this cahpter, although I haven't read them all yet, but I think you should consider it. Also, if you don't mind my saying, please make longet chapters. Very well done, Keep up the good work. ^^ |
Reviewed By: Anime Nut On: July 18, 2003 23:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
*falls over anime style* Way to leave a person hanging. You have a good thing going here, however, I'm not trying to be meen here, but I think you better get someone to read these over before you post them. There are quite a few mistakes in this cahpter, although I haven't read them all yet, but I think you should consider it. Also, if you don't mind my saying, please make longet chapters. Very well done, Keep up the good work. ^^ |
Reviewed By: me On: July 18, 2003 13:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Neko-yashaccs [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pleas continue.. I like it I rilly,rilly do ^_^
I under satand when some ones talking but it would be easer to read thuo.... |
Reviewed By: Neko-yashaccs [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 22:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pleas continue.. I like it I rilly,rilly do ^_^
I under satand when some ones talking but it would be easer to read thuo.... |
Reviewed By: Sumechick15 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 14:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this fanfic! It's cool. I feel bad cuz you can't put " in your story though, I know that feeling. For awhile I couldn't use the L button on my keyboard. That was a bitch! Anywayz! Good story, keep it up! And uhh...can you somehow get Kenshin in the story? I'm sorry! I just luv that story too! Well keep up the good work, (OMG that sounded so damn corny) |
Reviewed By: Jvirgo90 On: July 13, 2003 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is great keep writin |
Reviewed By: Inu-kun185 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2003 23:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
The story is great, but you need to work on your spelling and grammer. You need to put quotation marks when the people are speeking, it's easier to understand. But besides that the story is great! Continue.... |
Reviewed By: dranged fan fic lover On: July 12, 2003 23:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you do great crosses so I would like you to do a inu-kensin please please please |
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