| "Release" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: lolita21 On: December 27, 2003 01:02 CST
Comment/Review:
please tell me that you're not going to end it here! There's so much more to explore! please keep going!
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Reviewed By: __Nomi__ (not signed in again) On: September 14, 2003 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, a beautiful fic. I enjoyed this one just as much as the others. It's probably the most unique story I've read up to date that isn't an AU. It's OOC, but well-done OOC. All in all...I liked it. ^^ |
Reviewed By: Turtlefire On: July 25, 2003 01:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is just a great fic! Orignial and dramatic. I hope our poor Duo will learn to love sex with Heero later though. Please continue this series! By the way, you have a very interesting website. |
Reviewed By: Suzume On: July 16, 2003 23:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THere... must... be... more... **chokes** NOOOOOO MUST FIND MORE! MOREMOREMOREMORE! **bounces around in suspense** GAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: The Firefaery [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 05:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Both fics are amazingly well written, especially for this genre of literature (fanfiction) and tone of the fics. It's hard to find good fanfiction, and harder yet to find well written psychological fics like this. Most are too intense and very OOC, but somehow, in the midst of all this darkness and twisted...whatever it is, the characters are still mostly true to themselves. It's a very compelling story arc, and though you've expressed that you don't care for the anime, I think many readers, including myself, would greatly appreciate another installment to this story.
Well done!
^The Firefaery^ |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 07:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolute brilliance. Both of these fics were well written, thoroughly original pieces of fiction. Emotionally intense, you kept the boys very much in character. I'm going to echo your other reviewers...please continue this marvelous story arc, if only with one more installment. As wonderful as these two were, there is still more to be explored, and I'm so very intrigued, and would love to read more.
Forgive me for just reviewing Release, and not Tension...I've been awake for more hours than I have fingers and toes to count on! @.@ |
Reviewed By: Bratcat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have done an exceptional job on a series you confess to have little interest in. Your writing is outstanding and the story in intensely interesting. I must admit I am like your other reviewers and wish you to continue this series to see what other interesting ideas your highly unusual mind comes up with.I have printed up your two stories to keep with other works I have found to be exceptional. |
Reviewed By: Cath Nye On: July 12, 2003 23:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked both fics and i think that you should write a series/arc about it. Its original yet, classic (is that the right word?).
whispered_nothing@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: Airen On: July 12, 2003 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I liked this. Yeah, I'm a real sicko, but I'll admit it. It was twisted and made me squidgy, but I liked it anyway. It was well-written and put new twist on things...plus, I liked your evil endings. I hope you write another part to this, because I'm very interested to know what Duo ends up doing about the situation he's caught in.
Yeah. I liked it. Good job. |
Reviewed By: Elise On: July 15, 2003 00:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Is there more? Is that it? Please say its not it, cause i want to know whats gonna happen.... you have to write more.. please, just a little more? |
Reviewed By: lead7girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 11:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the "messed-up in the head" twist. Damn those doctors! :o)
You have an excellent beginning of an arc. Please, PLEASE, (begging on my knees here) write a continuation. I would love to see if Heero and Duo can overcome their programming! |
