| "Troublemaker Girl on the loose!" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Lady Macbeth [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2006 13:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic SERIOUSLY needs to be beta-read. There are NO quotation marks in it, for one thing. The grammar and sentence structure alone make it largely unreadable. You may have an interesting story idea going, but it is completely lost in the execution of this fic.
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Reviewed By: animegirl411 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 10:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Karate Kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2003 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really great fic. Update soon.
Ciao,
Karate Kitty |
Reviewed By: midnitedreams On: July 30, 2003 12:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just luuuuuuuv this fic. So plz update it. |
Reviewed By: AnimeAngel007 On: July 30, 2003 00:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
I just love this fic... Write more! |
