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| "Sorcerer" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: bloodandfires On: November 15, 2006 22:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A wonderful fanfic! I love all your stories,but I don't usually review,so... Anyway, I just wanted to mention (several years late, but I just realized what you were trying to say) that in Chinese, usually if in a phrase, "guang" would be alone (you don't have to write "guangxian"). Also, when naming colors, you don't have to write "se" after them all. It's like saying: "The color green!" as opposed to just "green!"... and it takes lots of time to write, so when writing, it's usually skipped (and sounds kinda awkward). But apart from the minor translation problems, it was very good.
| Reviewed By: selene963 On: July 21, 2003 14:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A wonderful 13x5 fanfic. Not many of those around these days. Beautiful work!! | Reviewed By: Mikey B23 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 05:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Mikey B23 here!!
Wow!! Great work on this fic!! KIU! I look forward to reading more of your works!
Mikey B23 out!!!!!!!.............. |
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