| "Strange New World (That Has Such Creatures In It)" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 07:20 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was deep. It was a really good story and well thought out. nice job. Definately a keeper.
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Reviewed By: FyreChylde (not logged in) On: March 25, 2005 05:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Someone told me about mpreg and I thought it was a horrible idea. But after reading this...you just made it so viable. Natural even. I thought some of the characters were slightly out of character, but the way you did it...they didn't seem sappy...just at peace finally. I enjoyed that immensely. Wow..I still can't believe how great that fic was. I loved how you described Kigeta...dark with all the colors of creation. Beautiful!!! Marvelously done! I will never forget this masterpiece ever. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: Bakani Banana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 21:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My god, this is one of the absolute BEST stories I've ever read. Little to no typos, the characters weren't so OOC that you felt offended and the Kais got their asses kicked!! BTW, I love Gohan and Pic being together and having an egg. (It's so perfect I could die.) Dedicating a loving fic to jesus is good. So many people wouldn't think so, but this is more of a tale of love and redemption (jalen) than just a "yaoi fuckfest" as so many people make the saiyan pairings to be. Not that I don't like the lemonade, but I love a great story with my fave charcters more. I feel sorry for Vegeta and having to bare Frieza's kids. Shit, 30 of them? (I only had three and one of those nearly ripped me apart. I'm not being dramatic. The doc said there was only 5mm of skin seperating me from healing properly and having major reconstructive surgery. Thank you God for drugs of all strengths and properties.) Sorry, I tend to wander. Where was I? Oh yeah, Awesome story!!
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Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2004 19:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AH-HA! I knew it! It was your writing that made me want to mention God to you in a review...but I usually don't get a good response to God in a yaoi community. ^_^ I'm so glad someone else is into Yaoi and believes in God. That is awesome to me.... And your story. I don't know if I've reviewed before. I certainly hope I have but fear I haven't. It was very well-written. I loved the god you put into this. I wanted to wave it to someone and say see, this is why I believe. It's not a matter of seeing him, or having him take an active part in our lives. It's about believing in his presence. It's not a crutch...it's a guide to living. So many people I've noticed have such difficult questions and can't find the answers. I always have difficult questions, but I believe he gives me the answers. I loved Vegeta in this fic. He's my fav character and he was sooo cool in this fic. That's irony, him being an avatar...and oh so cool. I was cheering all the way when he showed up Supreme Kai. I never did get him. Akira's idea of gods was weird.... I look for more of your delicious writing! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Little Wicked Minx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2004 17:47 CST
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I've just finished reading the fic, it's awesome!!! I think I read the first chapters at AFF.net... could it be? Anyway, I hadn't come across it again up until today just to see you had finished it. It's a really good fic with an original plot, which is rather hard to find and I enjoyed reading it immensely. I loved the Vegeta you presented us with. Great job.
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Title: Epilogue
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2004 13:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EXCELLENT!!! SERIOUSLY AWESOME!!! YOU RULE!!! Very very awesome fic! I have loved every chapter from beginning to end! This is definitely one of my all time favorite G/V fics, and I'm adding it to my favorites. Please feel free to email me if you plan on writing another, which I most certainly hope you do! Applaude, Applaude! You receive a standing ovation! Now, now, don't forget to take the flowers before you bow! =) Plyric
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Title: Words, Meet Mouth
Reviewed By: Rachel the Demon On: January 11, 2004 21:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
At one point, I honestly did not think it could be done. Probably because I'd stumbled on too freaking many that butchered the characters and the principles of basic anatomy beyond all recognition. I swear, it's a miracle. You've made mpreg believable! It's in-character! No female-bashing! And a really good, viable explanation for why male Saiyans can bear children. Really, I'm in too much shock to write anything constructive. I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: aeris98 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2003 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has got to be one of my top 10 favorite fanfics! ^_^ I love the fact that you have all of my favorite pairings (without all of them being ooc which I see alot in fics O_o), but that you also have a great intelligent well-written story as well! Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading future chapters! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sailor Pookie On: September 29, 2003 02:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story! Can't wait to read more!!!
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Reviewed By: Plyric On: July 13, 2003 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so ecstatic that you've decided to publish this on Mediaminer as well as Fanfiction.net!!! I'm also thrilled to get the honor of being the first one to review this seriously excellent fic on this website! As I've said before on FF.net, I love this story and I eagerly await when you publish the next chapter! Happy writing! =) |
