| "Head Games" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: black beauty On: August 24, 2003 09:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting fic. It's good that you made Dou strong. Most people just write him off as unable to live without Heero. Your fic was great to read. Keep up the *good* job. |
Reviewed By: Sundaire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god.. I actually read a fic that made me want to cry at the end. And I don't cry for fanfics!! Not even for HeeroxRelena ones (if I read them that is, because.. ick). Heero's such a rotten bastard in this! And not in a 'I'm going to physically abuse Duo' sort of way either. Emotional 'I'm f*ckining someone else' abuse.. from Heero.. quite the twist. Bastard!! Duo needs to beat someone up. Preferrably both parties involved.
You're a great writer I must say. And though I wish for a happy 1x2x1 ending in all GW fanfics, I know it cannot be. Keep up with the ability to provoke emotional response from readers. From what I can tell personally, you're good at it. |
Reviewed By: Sundaire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 20:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god.. I actually read a fic that made me want to cry at the end. And I don't cry for fanfics!! Not even for HeeroxRelena ones (if I read them that is, because.. ick). Heero's such a rotten bastard in this! And not in a 'I'm going to physically abuse Duo' sort of way either. Emotional 'I'm f*ckining someone else' abuse.. from Heero.. quite the twist. Bastard!! Duo needs to beat someone up. Preferrably both parties involved.
You're a great writer I must say. And though I wish for a happy 1x2x1 ending in all GW fanfics, I know it cannot be. Keep up with the ability to provoke emotional response from readers. From what I can tell personally, you're good at it. |
Reviewed By: Airen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is that it? Is that all there is?! Gaaaaahhh! ::falls over::
Man, poor Duo. What a way to end things. I know this is just a songfic, but I was kinda sorta hoping for a happy ending. Of course, I did like this because it was unusual...but man. 'Twas sad.
But...yeah. Good fic. |
