| "What Becomes of the Broken Hearted" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: VegetandAru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 04:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
You need to update this story, It's a really good storyline and will work really well, If you update you need to keep your readers attention!
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Reviewed By: MajinoujiVegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2003 15:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
please continue this story aswell as some of your others, i like this one and would love to know what happens next!!!!!!! Im a complete fan of Vegeta yaoi fics, ummm i think its a curse *or a gift* so ill be checking up on you and your many fic okay. Thanks a mil.
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Reviewed By: Adair On: September 27, 2003 20:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok... well... i've never reviewed a peice before. but i really loved the begining! you should totally keep this story going!!!
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Reviewed By: MajinoujiVegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 17:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, thats a really nice start, i like the idea of Vegeta dumping Kakarot. oh yeah can't wait til u update, plz continue. |
Reviewed By: arovak On: July 13, 2003 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i really luv the begining its great. poor vegeta how could goku do that (sigh) I really hope theres an explanation! write again very sooon. |
