| "Pregnant Fathers" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: En Satsu Koku Ryuu ha On: February 01, 2004 11:27 CST
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Great chapter! Keep up the great work! Update soon! C'mon I know you want to. ;)
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Title: love this
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 00:21 CST
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I really love this story it is very good. I can't wait to find out what happens please update soon. buh-bye
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Reviewed By: ChaosMage [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 18:18 CST
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I feel so sorry for Kurama and Naji (I read your fic Changes For Young People, and was slightly upset about how she turned out. She was just so damn cute in this fic, and happened to be my favorite.) But your writing is fantastic, much better than my own. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 11:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Awwwwww ... That was a sweet chapter! And no, I didn't see Hiei as being a "perv" or anything. What I saw was a bunch of special friends caring how each other felt and what they were going through. And this story is STILL on my "Must Keep Track Of It" list!! ^_~
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Reviewed By: midnightdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 05:08 CST
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please update soon, i want to see the rest of this story. ::Makes sad puppy face::
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Reviewed By: En Satsu Koku Ryuu Ha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 16:36 CST
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Hey! Great chapter! Also, is Hiei going to pair up with anyone? Just wondering. Anyway, keep up the great work, and update soon! Ja
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Reviewed By: HIEIhotsause On: November 13, 2003 20:37 CST
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i am soooooooooooo... sorry! please forgive me! on fanfiction.net i was just kinda new to it. at first i read your fic and i was disgusted because i thought that it was sick and disturbing, but then i got curious and read the third chapter and i loved it! i even had to search the whole web in order to satisfy my hunger buy alas! no matter how many preggy fics i read i am not satisfied so i need more! please continue and just forget about everything i said on the second chapter on fanfiction. net! pleae
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Reviewed By: an_insane_bear [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 06:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!updat e!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!upd ate!update!update!update!update!update!update!
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2003 21:19 CST
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YAY!!!You got back to it! Glad to see it too. That was an adorable chapter. Between Mukuro, the kids and the boys going out (even if Yusuke almost got himself killed) it was a good read!
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2003 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is one of those stories that goes into my "Must Keep Track Of" sections. I love the way you have everyone working together (even if it is reluctantly sometimes). |
Reviewed By: Faen On: August 20, 2003 18:15 CDT
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Yea! Please update soon. I kinda agree with you about fanfic. A lot of the people there are really annoying. Well, please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens. |
Reviewed By: Youko of the koku ryuu ha On: July 30, 2003 13:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic very funny!!! Again please don't stop with the storys!! I'll be sure to check back for the rest so in your words Ja mata! |
Reviewed By: Charlie The Otaku Nymph [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 01:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My face hurts from smiling through practically the whole thing. It's just so cute. You really are a talented writer. I applaud you. |
Reviewed By: SirPsychoSexy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 15:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very original idea for a fic!!! ^^
I've had an inkling Hiei isn't exactly a "boy".
This is very touching, and I'm surprised at the Japanese you know (Boku, ninensê da yo!)! (Actually, I'm going to be a san'nensê next year, but oh well.)
-SPS |
Reviewed By: Yendtra On: July 13, 2003 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I practically smiled through the whole story!! It was great especially since it was based on my fav character HIEI!!! You are a great writter and I don't know why but while reading your story you made me think of my Friend Madison aka Jessica, I was just reading, and it came to mind at the very beginning. Some of my ideas come from the shower but mostly when I'm in my room making episodes up *cough*.
The only thing that made me twitch yet laugh was Hiei being the chichiue and hahaue. Me being a girl Hiei fan - Lets not think nasty.
Keep up the writing don't change its unique-ness.
Buh-Bye |
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