| "Pregnant Fathers" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: Starr Dust [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, what can I say. This was a great story. Well written, unique, vetually no spelling or grammer mistakes. This story was awsome. Your a really good writer.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 17:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think I'm gonna cry now that this story is finished. I loved this story it is one of my favs. The last chapter was excellent and it was great. Though i have to say any interaction between hiei and yus ends up funny and the one in this chap was hilarious. I'm gonna miss this story and i can't wait until you write the epilouge. I will be sure to check out more of your stories especially if they're as good as this one. Keep up the great job. Buh-Bye ^__^
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 05:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I read this on AFF and really enjoyed it. It made me take a look at some of your other fics which I also liked. I think you throw in a bit too much Japanese, though you do provide a glossary, but at least the English is cogent and grammatical. Hiei is probably my favorite Spirit Detective and I really can't see him with Kurama so I like that these are M/F stories. I also like that you don't write Kuwabara as a total thicky.
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Title: great
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 18:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow that chapter was great. I love this story so much. it's great that you are doing the two seperate chapters instead just one cause i think i would have missed this story too much. Will there be a sequal it there is i would mos def read it. Please update asap. Buh-Bye ^_^
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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From the sounds of it, you've got a full plate going. Hope it all evens out for you soon! This was a wonderful chapter. The way Shizaru gooned Kuwa was great ^_^ And as for me ... been hanging out for this long, I can wait till you have time to write more ^_^ (as long as ya DO that is) ^_~
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Reviewed By: DreamAnimeKitten [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 21:16 CDT
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I think you should wait. I wanna see who or if Hiei ends up with someone. Plus the story is so good I don't want it to end
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Reviewed By: -midnightdemon On: May 09, 2004 03:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please don't end it yet. i love this story, and i've been waiting for you to update for a while now.
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Reviewed By: The Chaotic Ones [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 14:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the chapter after this definetly!! this is realy good!!!!
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Well, I'm going to be biased ... I love this story and want to see as many chapters as you'll write so ... does that count as a vote?? Just went through and re-read the whole thing and I still love it!
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Title: please please more
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 15:36 CDT
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What ever is better for you is great though i would like two more chapters if that means more content but i thought this story was going to be alot longer. Will there be a sequeal? That would be cool if there was one. Please update soon. Buh-Bye ^__^
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Title: love it !!!!
Reviewed By: sango 16 On: February 23, 2004 19:27 CST
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I liked your chapter very much. It was very said though. It was shorter than you normal chapters so it was over before I realized it *sniff sniff*. You updated on my birthday yay! Please update soon I'll be the first one here to read. BUH-BYE, ^__^ Lauren
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Reviewed By: En Satsu Koku Ryuu Ha On: February 22, 2004 00:04 CST
Comment/Review:
great chapter! though it was short, it was still good. Keep up the great work, and update soon! Ja ne
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Reviewed By: kittyme2 On: February 15, 2004 13:39 CST
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Write. More. Chapters. Pleeeeeeeaaaassssseeee!!!! Thank you. Great story. Write more.
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Reviewed By: Youko Starr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 20:12 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh it was great!!!! please update again soon, i love it. and even though I normally hate hiei/mukuro, i think they would be cute. hell, even shizuru/hiei. i feel bad for kurama, i wish his friends could help him get his child back
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Reviewed By: Dragon Tamer 103088 On: February 01, 2004 15:47 CST
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keep writing and please update soon this is really good
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