| "Gods of Power" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Chibi Kitsune (Shade) On: November 22, 2003 14:22 CST
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Your underage to be writng these? Me too! How old are you(I'm not american)? Cool fic!!! Me ish a hentai! And for last chap's question: A penny is just under the worth of 2 cents, not much is lost!
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Reviewed By: ja ne to my kio i will mess u ver much On: November 17, 2003 20:14 CST
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well i love your story it is great!! jus tso u know i am only 13 ang i am an 8th grade next year i will be 14 and be a 9th grader.. -_- so u rnt the only youngest person in your grade i probobly am 2 and i am only 4Ft11in!!!!!!!! i hate bein short sixth graders are taller then me not to menchion SEVIES!!! can it get ne worse!!!???!!! and the deal wqith my name is my very clost uh hemm BF just got killed he was murdered by his dad...SO u can see i am very depreesed so LIFE cant get much worse for me other then all my friends ditchin me except 2 so i am depreesed pissed angry sad and confused as hell right now so i am eading fanfics to get my mind offf things right now.....-_-.
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2003 20:35 CST
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Very weird dream...but I did like the lemon, very good. Well, update soon!! Can't wait for the next chapter...
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Reviewed By: Koishii No Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2003 23:01 CDT
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This was a great chapter. Yugi and Yami kawaiiness! lol. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2003 19:28 CDT
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^_^ Me like it, very creative and wonderful. Such a fluffy scene between Yami and Yugi, 1 of the best one's I've read. Continue soon please!! Must see how Malik and Marik act, or how much they love each other!!
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Reviewed By: oOkoimizuOo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2003 23:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked that fic ALOT! It was Uber enjoyable and a wonderful story line! Can't wait to se what other things you have in mind for this story and I'm sure I'll enjoy anything you throw out there. ^^ |
Reviewed By: Neko-chan35 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 19:34 CDT
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I think this is very creative, but where's the plot twist everyone loves? ^^ Otherwise, this is very very good! |
Reviewed By: Sakura tenshii [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 13:19 CDT
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noooooooooooooooooooooooo YOU MUST CONTINUE!!!!!!PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!
Sakura Tenshi |
Reviewed By: Heather On: July 16, 2003 20:28 CDT
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Hiya! It's me again! I think Ryou should be dominant just to show that not all people are exactly as we "see" them. Ryou might like to be dominant and Bakura just might like to be dominated in some sort of kinky way. I don't know if there should be lemon *yet* but a little bit of lime. Save the good stuff just to annoy the horny folk. (Yes, I know I'm evil Muaha *cough*) I have a quistion, how do you umm get on this thing to where you can make your own fics and all you have to do is click my name to get all that info and stuff? I've never done anything like this before except...read. I like your writing. |
Reviewed By: Heather On: July 14, 2003 15:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was pretty good. I think it's really sweet! Yugi is so kawai! Can't wait to see more of your work! |
Reviewed By: Saphirerose [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 14:35 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is a pretty interesting. Please update soon |
