| "Reincarnation" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Angelteen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2004 13:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story so far but I'm confused you have all these reviews but you won't write more hmmm... I don't have many review at all and I stiil write for just the **** of it so why don't you do the same maybe if you actually wrote more ppl would visit more often.
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Reviewed By: Amy On: August 18, 2003 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your fic so far. Very funny. I hope you have a longer chapter next time . I can't wait to read more.
-Amy- |
Reviewed By: BBunny On: August 18, 2003 01:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love your story idea. But now the question is who will Kagome end up with? Make your chapters longer too please, i am like "GREAT story...huh? Where the rest? NOOOOO!!!!!*sob*" |
Reviewed By: Kagome421230 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2003 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kool finish it |
Reviewed By: ?????? On: July 29, 2003 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more PLEEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSSSSSEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!Don't leave us hanging |
Reviewed By: Shawna On: July 29, 2003 21:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more PLEEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSSSSSEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!Don't leave us hanging |
Reviewed By: Kachie-chan On: July 25, 2003 20:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
oooh! I like it. Few minor spelling mistakes but hey the story is good! |
Reviewed By: ChUNky LuVeR [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 00:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
YES!!! NOW WRITE!!! |
Reviewed By: Kagome421230 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 20:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yea |
Reviewed By: Kachie-chan On: July 23, 2003 20:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Personally I don't like teasers like this. I'd prefer a chapter and "judge" the story that. As a compromise the story idea sounds good, to read it would be better. |
Reviewed By: Hol [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 19:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
lol nevr mind i found it lol |
Reviewed By: Hol [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 19:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
um......i cant see the story but it sounds rly rly good but i cant see the first chapter whats up with that? |
Reviewed By: Kithkin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2003 21:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmm, good idea. I'd like to know if the formatting was intentional, or a quirk of mm.org. Both the spelling and grammar had enough problems to seriously detract from the story for me, and there was no lyricism. I think you have a really really good skeleton of a great idea, but that in order to do it justice you'll have to punch up your prose, as well as either a beta reader or good self-checking to catch typos and ackwardness. |
