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| "What to do about evil" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 00:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
First opinion is on the gang rape. Of course almost any woman would 'not' agree to that, although one or two might. I'll say this, treat other's as you would wish to be treated. Would some guy like having a 'stick' shoved up his ass several times unwilling? I think not, so why would he and his friends 'have sex' a woman who dosen't want it? I don't know. As for an actual review, you and me think alike. When Kagome was arguing on what to do with Miroku and Inuyasha and they mention killing, I thought of that bandit robbing thing myself. I read a book before where a villian staged a 'criminal attack' on the hero and his band. It made me think of it, and you wrote it before I knew, kewl. This story is very real. Demons aren't the only evil out there. Good work. I'm not bothering with ratings. You should know by now what my scores are. ^_^
| Title: interesting point of view
Reviewed By: nekochan_30 On: September 20, 2003 01:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I agree with you. She may be naive but you must always choose betweent two evils when there is no other choice. great story, violent but through.
Make for good reading and mind fodder. gang rape makes for virility... better not give my opinion... it will get pretty violent too. arigatou | Reviewed By: Mellie On: July 17, 2003 15:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a little dark, ok..a lot dark. Liked your research, your writing style even pointing out what the normal reactions to Sango in feudal Japan. Liked it, the fact that they had to kill bad humans shouldn't make that much effect on Kagome, she has had to deal a lot with death, and shouldn't discriminate between the death of humans verses demons at this point. Her best friends are demons. Like your other fic also. I think you should show them distancing their selves from Kagome, and her realizing just how much she needs normal friends. |
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