"Thoughts" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Lady Morrigan On: September 09, 2005 23:26 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Eh, not bad, pal, but you need to write more. It would make a good beginning, but makes a lousy one-shot read. However, it does capture my interest, which I always look for in any text-type reading material.... ^-^
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Reviewed By: LadyCelticVoile [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2004 00:56 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: personally, i liked it very much. i don't think it sucked in the least, that i do not
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Reviewed By: Midnight Loner On: July 17, 2003 21:14 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review: I'm giving it a six because your first chapter is somewhat boring, no offense. However, it's good and it's very intriguing. What is tomorrow going to bring? Continue, please! |
Reviewed By: Rosita On: July 17, 2003 18:00 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Good story! loved it...I agree if I owned this I would have 009 and 002 hook up, maybe you could write something like that? lol....please continue this story though. It is very well written. |
Reviewed By: Destined Fate On: July 16, 2003 12:03 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG! This is such a good fic! You shouldn't say that it sucks before you have someone else read it! I have one suggestion, can you PLEASE hook 002 up with and original character?!! Please?! I love those things! Write MORE!!!! |
Reviewed By: foxprincessfire On: July 15, 2003 05:21 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: i like it its intersting write more befor you say it sucks ^v^ |