| "Both" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: EmpressGalaxia On: July 20, 2003 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is painful.
Ahem...I mean, sorry, I try to only use constructive criticism. One moment.
This is painful.
Well, shit. I guess there's nothing else to say.
=^..^= |
Reviewed By: Chenna On: July 18, 2003 13:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed it I hope you decide to someday give this story a few more chapters, I'd love to see what happens next! |
Reviewed By: nemetfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 02:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
i really like it. are you going to continue?. you should put it in fanfiction.com more people go there. |
