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Reviewed By: MissNikki On: November 24, 2003 13:04 CST
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I have not read it yet, but i have saved all four chapters on my desktop to give me something to do. I read the summary and liked it...i scanned each chapter and i see that it's going to be very good when i read it. Plz don't leave me in suspense. I'll be back in a week to chaeck for new chapters. By the way from the reviews i got the impression that you haven't let Hojo know about InuYasha yet...let him down hard. I'm not a Hojo fan...I believe that when he keeps cornering Kagome when she goes back to her time InuYasha can smell his scent on her when she goes back through the well...Hojo should have a run in with Hojo ans recognize the scent and let Hojo know that Kagome...'His Kagome'...has someone and no longer has a use for him. But if you already let Hojo down just remember this for a future story. MissNikki: I would appreciate an update soon, thankyou. Sassy: You haven't even read the story don't start demanding an update. Kimmie: She didn't demand...she asked nicely for once. I think it's because she hasn't read it yet. MissNikki: I would have you know that the reason I am asking nicely is because i haven't updated on my stories in like 2 weeks. So why should I rush someone to update theirs when i haven't updated mine. Kimmie: If I didn't know any better...I'd say you were drinking. Tyemika: *enters from kitchen* Who drank the vodka. There was a pint left. And the scotch is half gone too! Kimmie: What!!! *turns to see MissNikki talking to the mirror* I was right...but wait...why didn't we smell it on her? MissNikki: Your kinda cute...If you weren't female I'd go out with you...don't try to touch me you seem kinda gay trying to touch me Kimmie: Nictasha go to bed! NOW! MissNikki: Why??? ?_? Kimmie: You drank all the vodka MissNikki: Not all of it...I slit it with TyTy Kimmie: She can hold her liquer MissNikki: then that's why she's passed out in the kitchen. I turned her on her side because i didn't think she'd like throwup in her eyes. Kimmie: You idiot!!!!
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Reviewed By: Amanda a.k.a. Kazk [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2003 08:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW, you only have 14 reveiws, now 14. You should have like a million. Seriously that is the meanest cliffy I have ever read. I love it. Please keep going. |
Reviewed By: dbzgurl_34 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2003 17:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a good story cant wait till you come out with your next chapter hope itz soon. *_* ^_^ |
Reviewed By: notzathros On: July 27, 2003 21:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome! Can't wait to see how it turns out. Thanks!! |
Reviewed By: Kagome421230 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MUST...FINISH...SOON!!!! |
Reviewed By: cx On: July 25, 2003 19:04 CDT
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sadly, its a phase every anime fanfic author experiences, but stop.writing.japanese.phrases!and at least if your gonna do it, do it right! inu yasha no nii-chan, not oni-chan. |
Reviewed By: Llorona [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 20:58 CDT
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Very enjoyable so far! Keep up the good work! ;) |
Reviewed By: Kachie-chan On: July 23, 2003 20:58 CDT
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This is a good story. I can't wait for more. |
Reviewed By: Raye-Rei [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 13:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooooo! It's getting good! You've got to keep this up! I will be very sad if it stops. Yup yup!
Raye-Rei |
Reviewed By: Kirisame [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it !!!
aaw, please, don't let any misunderstood happen between these two...
they're just so cute together...
MAKE Hojo understand that he is no match...
( I'm a big big big big big fan fo IY/Kag ^^-_-^^ )
go on ^^ |
Reviewed By: Aimee On: July 17, 2003 18:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
i definately like your story so far. i think you should keep posting your story. I really don't have a suggestion on what you should use for an idea because so far i am liking the direction your story is going. |
Reviewed By: mandi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 06:27 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic, it has a great start. And I can't wait for more from you. Does he tell her he loves her???I'm dying over here!! So I'll be waiting....oh, I've never read a fic like this before either...so I hope you have fun writing it 'cuz I'll have fun reading it!!Ja Ne!
~mandi |
Reviewed By: alexis On: July 17, 2003 00:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story so far and I can't wait for the next chapter. I just love when Inu gets all jealous! |
Reviewed By: notzathros On: July 16, 2003 20:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Keep up the good writing. Thank You!! |
Reviewed By: Julia On: July 15, 2003 21:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I really like this story so far, partly because your writing reminds me of Ookami-chan's, who is one of my fave Inuyasha fanfic writers, and partly because, well, it's just really good. I like stories that dwell on Inuyasha's uncertainty between Kagome and Kikyou, of course with him realizing his stronger feelings for Kagome in the end :) Anyway, it is good, honest, not just saying that, and weekly updates are always great! (Take all the time you need, but I'll still look forward to the next update.)
Alright, I'm done, and arigatou for the new chapter! |
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