"May Your Roads Be Straight And Narrow" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: cnghn Reviewed By: fchgn On: March 16, 2004 20:07 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10 Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Klingit On: December 04, 2003 18:30 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Don't worry, this isn't a flame. I'm glad you didn't pair Mokuba and Seto together. Nice touch, making Seto have feelings. You almost make him seem human... Anyway, I guess I mean thanks. Seto is my favorite character and all, so yeah, again, thanks a lot. The graduation scene is touching. Almost true to the storyline. I'd welcome a sequel, as long as it doesn't have to do with any incest/yaoi. All right, that's all, bye.
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Reviewed By: Genny On: September 28, 2003 18:01 CDT Comment/Review: Oh my, you reminded me of that AWFUL song... do re me fa so ti ti la, fa me re re mi fa mi.. *sobs* It was a good fic though. Hey, 8 more months till we have to sing it again. ;)
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Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: July 16, 2003 14:13 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That was a very beautiful and touching fic. I loved. Thank you for writing it. So nice and sweet. I just graduated high school and I was happy to find the first fic I have ever seen of YGO peeps graduating. It's an awesome idea. Thanks again for putting it out there. ^_~ You gave a sweet portrayal of Kaiba-sama and I hope other people write more fics like this in the future now. Great song as well. Good job! Arigato! Ja ne! |