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| "Adrenaline" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] | | Pages (3): [ « < 1 2 3 > » ] | Reviewed By: Malik's Girl and her Yami On: July 29, 2003 15:21 CDT
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Human? When did we EVER say we were human? If you didn't know, we like BOTH Malik and Marik, so THERE! And Kate, Shadowdragon is weak. We know this for a fact. Bakura, Malik, Marik,and Yami Yugi combined aren't as strong as us! Combine everyone, even weaklings like Yugi couldn't match our strength. So Shadowdragon, BRING IT ON!!!!! | Reviewed By: Kate On: July 29, 2003 14:19 CDT
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Luscious Told me to post this, because she didn't see the reviews before she posted, she told me what to say, so thanks from Luscious to
Katmon- 1st reviewer, you rule...
kazuki x3, don't worry about them, it's a pretty happy ending, but luscious was not contet with it, and she said that she's soooooo sorry that it sucks... She wants to make it up
Sumomo- thank you for the compliment, you are good too
Kurai Neko-thanks for not being scared of my yami, she's not that evil
kazuki - I do too, I really think that they are good together, BUT some people don't... *jerk Malik's girl*
Malik's Girl-ok, Luscious just called me, this is her exact words, "Kate, you gotta type this, what the heck is up with that girl, I thought she liked Marik, but its Malik she likes, (I assumed so too, the fuss she was making) well tell her that its Marik who's gay, NOT his Yami, Malik even says, in the 4th chapter, Floating on the Edge of sanity, Marik says he will enjoy breaking Ryou, (sleeping with him) and Malik says, and I quote directly,
//I don't understand your preferences//
Which means he doesn't understand why Marik is attracted to men... So therefore, Malik is NOT GAY!!!!!!!!!!!
Bishojo_shadow- You don't even know how pyched Luscious was, she read some of your stories, just recently, today in fact, and when she found out that you wrote them, she was SO HAPPy, this is from her
"OMG, you wrote the Pharaoh's Gift!!!! I LOVED that story, I only read it today, you ARE so the COOLEST!!!!!!!!"
Yep, she was PRETTY happy
bread-box- THANK YOU soooooo much, you are so nice, you don't even know how much you me up after those man remarks...
There were no reviews of importance until
kazuki-Don't worry, I posted, it's so nice to know that you like my story, don't hate me for my last chapter, I am soooo soory for it
Luscious: Hey Kate, am I talking to them (she's on the phone, I'm reading what I wrote,) Ohh, I am so happy to have gotten such nice reviews from these people, also want to thank, sugarbeanrulez, for her sweet e-mail... | Reviewed By: Kate On: July 29, 2003 13:37 CDT
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OK, first off, LusciousDragon is my best friend, and I HATE it when someone makes fun of her, so shut the fuck up. Sorry everyone else, but really, what has she EVER done to you for you to be mean to her, she firmly believes that everyone is nice, but YOU, well you are a terrible bitch, I can't believe after she wrote that whole thing about how she forgives you, and she understands how you feel that you can still go and leave a nasty review, and you gave her such low results, all I can say is that, her yami is out there looking for you, and when she finds you, I feel so sorry for you, she was practially spitting fire... She might have seemed nice, but trust me, she can be worse than Bakura and your all-so-precious MARIK COMBINED!!!!!!!! And what makes you think that Marik would like you anyway? I mean he is slightly off-balance mentally, but he's not retarded... And what's more, have you read the other reviews, in case you didn't notice, no one thinks your nice, so why don't you go off and spend some time with precious Marik, oh wait, he probably HATES you too! I seriously doubt that you will ever have many friends, LusciousDragon has TONS of friends becasue she firmly believes that everyone is good, but YOU, You are the saddest excuse for a human that I've ever seen. I always tease Luscious that she is like Yugi, and she is, so basically, you hurt someone as pure as little Yugi. Well anyway, I don't relish to be in your place when ShadowDragon finds you, she'll kick you and your yami's arses, and I sincerely doubt that your snide comments about her hikari will do you any good... | Reviewed By: kazuki On: July 29, 2003 03:08 CDT
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marik want kill ryou ? O.O
iyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa daaaaaaaa!!!
now I will wait for the next chapter and pray for a happy end
please keep writing because I like very much your fic
and don't care for everything Malik's Girl said | Reviewed By: Malik's Girl On: July 28, 2003 22:33 CDT
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Don't make me spill all of your blood down the steps of Ra's Temple. I DO have the guts to say this and everything else I've said, so FUCK OFF! I am NOT a bloody broad, and I'M A GIRL MORON! Okay, so I have read the whole fanfic. I'm a Hentai lover. So what! Have a problem with it? If your answer is yes, I've got a question. WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING READING THIS!!!!!!!!! And now, just to be mean, I'm going to screw up the reveiw section of your story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :P | Reviewed By: bread-box On: July 28, 2003 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*glomp* You deserve muuuch more than just 10's! Wonderful story...I completely enjoy what you have up so far!
And "malik girl" fuck off, *mutters* bloody broad...I'm gonna kick you and your yami's bloody arses! I bet you've read the entire story, but just want to be a dumbarse since you are too scared to actually say any of that shit in real life. I've seen dumbarses like you before, you get made fun of in real life so you are comforted by the fact that you can be a slut to others over the internet. *rolls eyes* If ya don't like the story, dumbarse, then don't click on it. How stupid can you get...*sigh* | Reviewed By: Malik's Girl's Yami On: July 28, 2003 15:43 CDT
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Shadowdragon I'm coming for you and your Hikari! You don't scare me and you never will! You are a weakling! And if you are wondering why I don't tell you my name, it's for one reason, you don't deserve too know!My name is a secret my Hikari and I keep to ourselves! She knows that pain WILL be involved if she tells anybody my name! I will tell you when the time is right! | Reviewed By: Malik's Girl On: July 28, 2003 15:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good Marks? What good marks? Oh and by the way, my Yami could kick your Yami's ass into the next century. Fine, don't walk into any dark allyways, but my Yami will find you, and hurt, or hopefully kill you and your good for nothing Yami. Besides, I HATE crybabies.Yes that means YOU lusciousdragon. | Reviewed By: Malik's Girl On: July 26, 2003 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fisrt off I absolutley HATE you for making Malik/Marik be gay if you couldn't tell by the nickname. Secondly why would Ryou love Malik/Marik. Answer me that Mortal.
P.S.- You might not want to walk into any dark alleyways, because my Yami is out there looking for the one called lusciousdragon. | Reviewed By: Malik's Girl On: July 26, 2003 14:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapters too short! Make longer or me will hurt you! | Reviewed By: kazuki On: July 26, 2003 04:33 CDT
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hoo i like the last chapter *_____*
ryou love really malik???????
I hope because they so beautiful togetheeeeeer
thanks pour the lemon *_______*
keep writing pleaseeeeeeeeeee | Reviewed By: Kurai Neko On: July 22, 2003 03:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE WRITE MORE????!!!! :'(
Oh and I think Shadow Dragon COOL!!!! ^_^Wish my Yami would stick up for pocky eating ass. >_<
^_^ | Reviewed By: Sumomo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 20:52 CDT
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Come on guy, finsih? Please? I only review good or great fics, and this is great, so finish it? | Reviewed By: kazuki On: July 20, 2003 18:01 CDT
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hoooooooo.
more malik/ryou pleaseeeeeeeeeeee | Reviewed By: Katmon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 15:03 CDT
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KK: Foolish mortals.... Do not understand reviewing... *annoyed look at other readers*
It was fab!! lol I liked it. Very creative. Short chappies, but good! Can't wait till next chappie! And, don't worry, your yami doesn't scare me. I'm immortal, at least, that's what I tell ppl...
Pugio: This is why it is fdangerous to tell my hikari she is a Goddess in a review. She goes slightly insane....
KK: *smirks* Wanna say that to my face?
Pugio: You're insane.
KK: *huggles* Wuv u!
Pugio: *gags* HELP!!
~KK =^.^=
AKA Junshin
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