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| "Adrenaline" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] | | Pages (3): [ « < 1 2 3 ] | Reviewed By: Kate On: July 29, 2003 13:37 CDT
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OK, first off, LusciousDragon is my best friend, and I HATE it when someone makes fun of her, so shut the fuck up. Sorry everyone else, but really, what has she EVER done to you for you to be mean to her, she firmly believes that everyone is nice, but YOU, well you are a terrible bitch, I can't believe after she wrote that whole thing about how she forgives you, and she understands how you feel that you can still go and leave a nasty review, and you gave her such low results, all I can say is that, her yami is out there looking for you, and when she finds you, I feel so sorry for you, she was practially spitting fire... She might have seemed nice, but trust me, she can be worse than Bakura and your all-so-precious MARIK COMBINED!!!!!!!! And what makes you think that Marik would like you anyway? I mean he is slightly off-balance mentally, but he's not retarded... And what's more, have you read the other reviews, in case you didn't notice, no one thinks your nice, so why don't you go off and spend some time with precious Marik, oh wait, he probably HATES you too! I seriously doubt that you will ever have many friends, LusciousDragon has TONS of friends becasue she firmly believes that everyone is good, but YOU, You are the saddest excuse for a human that I've ever seen. I always tease Luscious that she is like Yugi, and she is, so basically, you hurt someone as pure as little Yugi. Well anyway, I don't relish to be in your place when ShadowDragon finds you, she'll kick you and your yami's arses, and I sincerely doubt that your snide comments about her hikari will do you any good... | Reviewed By: kazuki On: July 29, 2003 03:08 CDT
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marik want kill ryou ? O.O
iyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa daaaaaaaa!!!
now I will wait for the next chapter and pray for a happy end
please keep writing because I like very much your fic
and don't care for everything Malik's Girl said | Reviewed By: Malik's Girl On: July 28, 2003 22:33 CDT
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Don't make me spill all of your blood down the steps of Ra's Temple. I DO have the guts to say this and everything else I've said, so FUCK OFF! I am NOT a bloody broad, and I'M A GIRL MORON! Okay, so I have read the whole fanfic. I'm a Hentai lover. So what! Have a problem with it? If your answer is yes, I've got a question. WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING READING THIS!!!!!!!!! And now, just to be mean, I'm going to screw up the reveiw section of your story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :P | Reviewed By: bread-box On: July 28, 2003 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*glomp* You deserve muuuch more than just 10's! Wonderful story...I completely enjoy what you have up so far!
And "malik girl" fuck off, *mutters* bloody broad...I'm gonna kick you and your yami's bloody arses! I bet you've read the entire story, but just want to be a dumbarse since you are too scared to actually say any of that shit in real life. I've seen dumbarses like you before, you get made fun of in real life so you are comforted by the fact that you can be a slut to others over the internet. *rolls eyes* If ya don't like the story, dumbarse, then don't click on it. How stupid can you get...*sigh* | Reviewed By: Malik's Girl's Yami On: July 28, 2003 15:43 CDT
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Shadowdragon I'm coming for you and your Hikari! You don't scare me and you never will! You are a weakling! And if you are wondering why I don't tell you my name, it's for one reason, you don't deserve too know!My name is a secret my Hikari and I keep to ourselves! She knows that pain WILL be involved if she tells anybody my name! I will tell you when the time is right! | Reviewed By: Malik's Girl On: July 28, 2003 15:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good Marks? What good marks? Oh and by the way, my Yami could kick your Yami's ass into the next century. Fine, don't walk into any dark allyways, but my Yami will find you, and hurt, or hopefully kill you and your good for nothing Yami. Besides, I HATE crybabies.Yes that means YOU lusciousdragon. | Reviewed By: Malik's Girl On: July 26, 2003 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fisrt off I absolutley HATE you for making Malik/Marik be gay if you couldn't tell by the nickname. Secondly why would Ryou love Malik/Marik. Answer me that Mortal.
P.S.- You might not want to walk into any dark alleyways, because my Yami is out there looking for the one called lusciousdragon. | Reviewed By: Malik's Girl On: July 26, 2003 14:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapters too short! Make longer or me will hurt you! | Reviewed By: kazuki On: July 26, 2003 04:33 CDT
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hoo i like the last chapter *_____*
ryou love really malik???????
I hope because they so beautiful togetheeeeeer
thanks pour the lemon *_______*
keep writing pleaseeeeeeeeeee | Reviewed By: Kurai Neko On: July 22, 2003 03:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE WRITE MORE????!!!! :'(
Oh and I think Shadow Dragon COOL!!!! ^_^Wish my Yami would stick up for pocky eating ass. >_<
^_^ | Reviewed By: Sumomo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 20:52 CDT
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Come on guy, finsih? Please? I only review good or great fics, and this is great, so finish it? | Reviewed By: kazuki On: July 20, 2003 18:01 CDT
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hoooooooo.
more malik/ryou pleaseeeeeeeeeeee | Reviewed By: Katmon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 15:03 CDT
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KK: Foolish mortals.... Do not understand reviewing... *annoyed look at other readers*
It was fab!! lol I liked it. Very creative. Short chappies, but good! Can't wait till next chappie! And, don't worry, your yami doesn't scare me. I'm immortal, at least, that's what I tell ppl...
Pugio: This is why it is fdangerous to tell my hikari she is a Goddess in a review. She goes slightly insane....
KK: *smirks* Wanna say that to my face?
Pugio: You're insane.
KK: *huggles* Wuv u!
Pugio: *gags* HELP!!
~KK =^.^=
AKA Junshin
AKA Noa Girl | Reviewed By: Malik's Girl On: July 28, 2003 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good Marks? What good marks? Oh and by the way, my Yami could kick your Yami's ass into the next century. Fine, don't walk into any dark allyways, but my Yami will find you, and hurt, or hopefully kill you and your good for nothing Yami. Besides, I HATE crybabies.Yes that means YOU lusciousdragon. | Reviewed By: Bishojo_shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First i'm NOT Malik's Gurl i just wanted to tell you not to let flamers like her/him get to you alot of people (including myself) write fanfiction where Malik and Marik are gay and she's only targeting you which is completly unfair, your fic's rock! you should remove all teh reviews she sent you and just tell her that nothing she does or says will change what you've written and ignore her and her half witted Yami. She is simply a closed minded person and you can't change people like that you should give a few names (if it's okay) of Yaoi pairings to this person that include Marik hell i'll volunteer myself even to show her that your not the only one, anyway i'm rambling i just wanted to tell you that you'r story is awsome and Malik Gurl should just leave you alone, keep writing you rule!
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