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| "Ice Mask" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] | Reviewed By: Saelbu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 10:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this, great chapter, I hope you update soon. ^_^
| Reviewed By: TabiWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2003 14:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say that your stories are GREAT! I Love them. However, seeing as I have little time to write many reviews at once, I am review for all of the stories in which I have read. I am going to start with Ice Mask and then start with end with Children of Destiny. Ice mask is a very good story, I don't like the rape thing and I'm not sure sure if it was an attempted rape or a real rape, but I just don't like insest. Anyways, other than that, I liked it a lot! Now, Children of Destiny, THAT IS ONE HELLAVA STORY! Had my heart pounding all the way through it. HOWEVER, one thing that REALLY made me go crazy was that you just happened to us Whilst OVER 400 TIMES! I know, my computer counted for me. You might want to think about using While or During as a substatute in there somewhere. Another thing that I noticed was your spelling was WAY off on a lot of things. I'm not saying that I'm a perfect speller or anything, I make typo's all the time. However, if you request a bata reader, you can contact me at Babytabiwolf@hotmail.com . Not only will this allow me to see what brillent new ideas your head can come up with, but I can also make it more enjoyable for everyone else to read. My name is Tabi and I really hope you write more! TabiWolf
| Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 12:15 CDT
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I'm having major difficulties in reading my reviews and I find the only way to read them is when i type one myself DARN IT!!!!! Lovely people those who reviewed!!!! I'M SO HAPPY!!!! | Reviewed By: vampire of night [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 21:23 CDT
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I mean a sequl. it is good | Reviewed By: vampire of night [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is sooooooooooooooo good. Can wait for the next chapter. | Reviewed By: AnimeAna [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 21:40 CDT
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I loved this. There is no better way to describe it. Despair brought to the point of accepting that things aren't great, but you can move on. Very nice, inspirational too. | Reviewed By: vampire of night [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 21:44 CDT
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nvm. I dont noe what the hell i am talking bout. Dont write the sequel, i just read it.
Yami: u r soo stupid u noe
Vampire: SHUT UP, BAKA YAROU. |
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