| "A Day At the Park" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: darkmageliz [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 22:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
adorable fluffyness = happy fanfic reader :3 loved it...
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Reviewed By: fluffy On: August 01, 2003 08:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
there's only one thing needed to be said- CONTINUE |
Reviewed By: FairysGift On: July 29, 2003 05:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwwwww! i love fluffyness! ^___^
cute story. that last chapter was good so don't worry about it. if an idea comes into your head later on about how you could make it better just remove the old chapter and replace it with your new one. its no big deal. You should be proud of your story. its great! |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: July 25, 2003 03:25 CDT
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This fic is still lots of fun! The pidgeon thing was funny! ^_^ I can't wait for Seto/Jou chappy. I hope you update soon! Really soon. Great fic here. Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 20:47 CDT
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That last bit with the pigeon was hilarious! I loved it! I hope you do more soon! It will be interesting to see how you work Jou and Seto into the next chapter. Maybe you could have Marik and Malik make an apperance? Post more soon?!! |
Reviewed By: cerridwen On: July 24, 2003 15:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Aww...that was cute! LOL..pigeon attack. Very funny. Haven't read that one before. Pleae continue! |
Reviewed By: The Forgotten Chibi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 14:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww.... kawaii... I wuv kawaiinessy. i do seto and joey's way of hide n seek wit my mom. * winkwink* If she ever found out I wrote those stuppid pwanks of mine... * shudders* |
Reviewed By: chibibaka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 17:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic really made my day. I was smileing all the way through. yami/yugi fluff is the best! plz write more! great job!
^_^
byee |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: July 18, 2003 03:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Don't be embarssed it was very kawaii. The scene with the ice cream I mean. Makes me hunger for some actually. Mmmm yummy. Y&Y fluff and ice cream it doesn't get any better than that! Please write more soon! Arigato! Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: fluffy On: July 17, 2003 23:08 CDT
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that was so kawaii (sp?) well any way that was cute and I hope you keep writing. |
Reviewed By: Millenia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 15:06 CDT
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very very cute |
Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 03:18 CDT
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KAWAII!!! It weawwy desewvs a next chapew, pwease, soon? Oh, in useless point of fact, 3 is actually san, i think...*checks illegible notes to no avail* Oh, well. It's all the same thing. And it's not often Yugi's on top, but it makes for a good twist... Vewy vewy good! Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: July 17, 2003 02:28 CDT
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This is very kawaii. Please continue!! Onegai?! Arigato Y&Y fluff is my fav. =P Oyasumi! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 23:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was pretty good. Cute. I liked it. I hope you do more. I loved Seto's and Jou's version of hide-n-go-seek. |
