| "Repair Job" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: Sweet!
Reviewed By: cas (2 lazi 2 log) On: June 23, 2005 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweetness! Very creative! I've never read a fic with chaos and Tony before. So sexy! Well, they are of course. ~_^ You did a really neat job! I wish you would write a sequel! Very...Hott. To put it bluntly, just plain sexy. I thought chaos would be kinda shy too y'know? But, even though he's hott as hell, being sexy does have itz limitz. I just can't picture chaos being seme even though i Know he is! He just loox so delicate. Oh GOD especially those tight leather clothez he wherez! I wouldn't ahve him any other way. Tell me if you write a sequeal! Plz and Thx!
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Reviewed By: Sacura13 On: April 05, 2005 14:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
finally got time to read the scond chapter, ff sucks now that it won't let this kind of stuff be posted,please continue this fic it's really good.
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Reviewed By: Hisoka-chan On: February 23, 2005 06:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yay~ there are not enough Tony/chaos fics. But~ My only real critique is that in chapter 2 there was no foreplay at all x_x. getting right to the bang-bang wont usually make for a terribly enjoyable lemon. but i understand it was your first time writing one? It was still good, just short XD. chaos' reactions were nice-and i think realistic. please write more T/c~
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Reviewed By: AmethystGleam [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 01:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This amused me immensely. In a very good way. While I believe chaos has ties to just about everyone in Xenosaga, and hence can be paired with any of them, I now find the idea of chaos x Tony as being INCREDIBLY cute. You definately seemed to capture the personality of both characters, albeit I would CERTIANLY like to see a disheveled chaos. :D This was a nice piece. I'm glad you posted it.
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Reviewed By: Forlorn Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 17:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A really good fic. kinda short though. I'd like to see more.
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Reviewed By: Angela On: February 13, 2004 15:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINELY someone wrote a fic for Xenosaga. I have looked ever where for one. Thankyouthankyouthankyou! Oh and I love your story. Please contule writing. Ja ne! ^^
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Reviewed By: Midsyy On: September 23, 2003 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You write more? Nooo... why did I just write a question... you write more of 'dis NOW, hear me? NOW!
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Reviewed By: Eres On: July 28, 2003 00:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great! Write a sequel! ^__^ |
