| "Questioning Thy Self" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: blind [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2016 07:26 PDT
Comment/Review:
I actually liked this story. I just read it for the first time
today, and thought it was pretty nice. Plus, I like Daikari. I also
like the fact that you used their Japanese names as well; I do that
myself. Your style of writing was easy to read, with little to no
mistakes, and your sentences were not run-ons. I have a complex
against those. Hopefully, you keep writing. I'm trying to get back
into it myself.
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Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 08:58 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this story. I liked you mixed Kari's emotions with the sex. Usually I try to stray away from "emotional" hentai stories, (weird for a hentai author, huh?) but Davis' clumsiness when they first engaged in the act made it seem more realistic.
reaš |
Reviewed By: Ace94d [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 22:47 PST
Comment/Review:
I like it.
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Reviewed By: Vodca On: July 23, 2003 11:03 PDT
Comment/Review:
I must say that this is different for the other fics you ever wrote and I have to admit that this one happens to be a lot better than all the other fics you ever wrote; no offense. Everythings was well detailed and nothing too obscene was in this fic which helped make it a fic worth checking out.Although the DigiDestined were a bit OOC, however, I like that you didn't make them go overboard or have them do what you had them do in Red Digivice Diaries. What I like was the issues Kari and Davis had to consider seriously, but I will say that Tai is much of a hypocrite if you know what I mean.
I don't know if DigiAdvisor will add his/her two cents into this or not, but I will say again that this fic was actually good. |
Reviewed By: misticknight2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 12:57 PDT
Comment/Review:
Another great fic. I don't know where you get your ideas but they always seem to work out pretty well. I'm looking forward to even more posts(mabey even some following this story line).
Also as a side note: I was wondering when you would update "The Shuffle"? |
Reviewed By: Rocker_Starlight [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 16:34 PDT
Comment/Review:
Very interesting. Makes me more curious what inspired this idea. None the less, a very nice one shot, and a good job of keeping them IC while still accomplishing it. |
Reviewed By: Takuyatheflamewarrior [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 14:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How can I say this.... Perfect!!! This is by far the greatest and most interesting fanfic I've read. I f you've seen the anime Serial Experiments Lain. The anime goes indepth with felling and psycological stuff(whatever thats called). You're story is just like it. Keeps you thinking one thing and changes the next. |
Reviewed By: Dark_Phoenix_of_Chaos On: July 18, 2003 13:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Although its a Takeru\Noriko, Daisuke\Hikari fic.... Something I normally ignore...I enjoyed this fic alot.
I however cant wait for the next chapter of the Odiba diaries saga (Red Digivice Diaires\War Diaries)
Anyways, good fic! |
Reviewed By: TiggsPanther [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 04:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was good.
I especially liked Daisule's line about "boneheaded heroes".
I guess it's harder to laugh at someone doing something obviously stupid, when you feel mroe like slapping them for making the same mistakes you have. |
Reviewed By: Anonymous On: July 18, 2003 00:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was quite a good piece of fiction. It is always nice to read a story where sex is mixed with genuine human emotion. I particularly enjoyed the portions of the story where Hikari's feelings towards Daisuke changed. Your one shot stories (especially Unforgiven) are some of your best work. I hope you keep up the fine work. |
Reviewed By: Anna Yolei On: July 21, 2003 13:26 PDT
Comment/Review:
An excellent story. I never expected to be a fan of your work after the first time I read HDTH?, but you use hentai to create lessons in life. I think even that troll Digi-Advisor could find some good in this.
PLEASE update Tamers Spring Vacation!! :) |
