| "By the Light of a Bloodied Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: WHOA!
Reviewed By: xXAutumn_SkyXx On: September 24, 2003 18:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just have to say this one more time... Whoa! This is really really good! You have got to continue this very soon please! I'm just dying to know what happens next. Although I just want to point out u spelt waist waste...not that it matters. again, really good. Please continue.
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Reviewed By: Imbrii On: July 19, 2003 23:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Although I was skeptical of this fic at first, you managed to pull off merging the two series together and not making things horribly awkward, and write an interesting plot while still paying attention to detail. The only thing that stuck out were the homonym slipups or misspellings. Meet instead of meat, suite instead of suit--little things that were just overlooked. I'm not sure if I agree with Tsuzuki calling Hisoka "Soka-chan" at this point in time, but that's another minor factor. I hope you show a bit more of Tsuzuki's serious side in chapters to come, to balance out the hyper/cute side.
Good job! |
Reviewed By: tenshineechan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 05:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
I've enjoyed what you've written so far. It's a great piece of descriptive writing.
Keep up the good work and please update soon! |
