| "arrival" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Ymanetta23 On: January 26, 2004 16:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story some spelling mistakes but very creative. ^_~ You sould make an second part. I'm kinda left hanging.
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Reviewed By: Ciarra On: October 03, 2003 15:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow is this a good fic! It's very well written and I like your writing style. I can't wait to read the next chapter so update soon!
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Reviewed By: LadyFang On: July 31, 2003 03:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
I loved the story. Is that the opening for a sequel or for the next chapter? I'm confused. Please update soon. i'm about to fall out of my chair so I g2g! update soon. Bye! |
Reviewed By: skyaj87 On: July 18, 2003 17:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved your fic it was so cool. are you going to continue on or was that the end you could make an arrival 2 maybe...please continue |
