| "The Right Choice" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: The Goddess of Death On: December 18, 2003 00:28 CST
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Update Damnit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Seeker of Death On: November 28, 2003 00:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! Arigatou for updating your story. Please update soon! Thanx Bai bai ^_^
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Reviewed By: rAiNwAtEr On: September 13, 2003 11:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good fanfic I think it is coming along good. I wish you the best of luck with it. I started my first fanfic to, it's on fanfiction.net under rAiNwAtEr. It is called Fliped and Spun, check it out and write a review if you want. Have fun writing your fanfic I will be sure to keep in touch. Ja ne =p |
Reviewed By: DeathsAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2003 00:23 CDT
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I really like your story! I don't know how you came up with the names of all those corperations but...XD I love it! Please up date!
>_>
-_-; ok I just said the one thing that I need to do myself ::hides, untill she herself updates:: |
Title: OMG I AM SOOOO SORRY!!!
Reviewed By: Joe Diamonds On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
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I THOUGHT IT WAS INU-YASHA TALKING WHEN IT WAS KAGOME!!! I SO SORRY I SAID THAT YOU MADE INU-KUN GAY!! PLEASE DON'T HATE ME I HAVE NO LIFE NO MONEY I'M A COMPLETE AND TOLTAL FREAK AND KAMI I'M AN IDIOT!!!!!! I HATE MYSELF!!! I FEEL LIKE SUCH A JERK AND A BITCH!!!GOMEN,GOMEN,GOMEN,GOMEN,GOMEN,GOMEN!!!!!!!!!!I'M JUST AN IDIOT THAT'S HAD TOO MANY OF GRANDMA'S VENOM FILLED COOKIES!!!
P.S. :I CAN'T COPE WITH MY LIFE!!!! =(
::sob::sniff::sob |
Reviewed By: Joe Diamonds On: August 08, 2003 22:43 CDT
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I...Inu Y-Yasha...He...he's...GAY!!!
HOW COULD YOU?!?!?!!?!!?!!?!?!
"THE cute and cudly corperation?" ? "I bought at least 50 Items there, they are absouloutly cute!"?
"Kawaii!!! She is sooo cute"?
WHAT HAVE YOU DONE!?!?!??!??!?!??!?!??!???!??!?!!??!?!?!??!?!??!?!?!??!??!?!?!??!/!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!!?!?!?!??!??!!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!??!!??!!!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YOU...ARE...TWISTED...
GET HELP. No. I mean now. |
Reviewed By: fluffy'slova4life [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 01:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
up date! thats all i gotta say |
Reviewed By: fluffy'slova4life [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 03:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good fic i could go on and on and on but i *yawns* tierd soooo striaght to point:
GREAT FIC PLZ KEEP UP DATEING! |
Reviewed By: Eqlipse_Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why'd you stop there!!!???
I was sooooo getting into it!!
Oh well...UPDATE SOON!! |
Reviewed By: Seeker of Death On: July 18, 2003 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally love your story!!! Please Please Please update soon!!! Oh!? Question? Why do the characters say 'Ow' instead of 'oh' and could you please update soon thank you!!! bai bai |
Reviewed By: Lil_sweet_azn_gurl977 On: July 18, 2003 16:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have great writing skills. I hope you update more chapters. good Luck! |
Reviewed By: Anonymous On: July 18, 2003 16:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh, I liked it very much so. The chapters are long so thats good. ^^; Its very good, but you have some few grammar mistakes... Such as the parts when you put 'Ow' instead of 'Oh', was it done on purpose? Is so, then just ignore that part. ^^;; Hehehe. Please keep updating this story because I love it. ^___^ And remember, UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Raven On: July 19, 2003 14:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, the hole email thing I saw it in "The City by the Bay" and the Ramen thing too. So, it looks a little similar, just for you to know. And the characters are a little OOC.. I don't know if that is what you pretend but, they are. It's like my father/mother says to me that I have to marry with someone I don't know at all and I will say yes just that easy, and.. well Kagome do it so. Anyway, you have skill, I am only giving you good criticism, I don't pretend make you feel bad or anything. I am just being honest here.. and that is what I think. Sorry for the bad grammar, I'm latin :P |
