| "The Girl and the Band" Reviews/Comments [ 454 ] |
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 03:09 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY HEY HEY!!! this is an awsome story i started to read it last night and just finished the last chappie!! this one was funny the code names are fun lazer tag is a very good challenge!but please write more this is awsome i need to know wats gunna happen and in the begining i think there was a kikyou thing and she was pissed and said something but i forget wat but i want to know wat it is thats all i know and wat about the concert!! well keep it up cuz i love it :^)
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Reviewed By: ME On: December 20, 2003 01:18 EST
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Mmkay, just have to know--was the laser tag guy based on the 'Southpark' teacher??^_^ lotsa fun--can't wait for next update!!--and so glad end of fic is not near^_~
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 23:15 EST
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SHAGGY MUTT!!!!!!!!!HAHAHAHA now that was funny!And Inuyasha knocked down the door!! When is Kagome going to figure out that he's half-demon and when is Kikyou going to step in??? Well update soon mmkay?
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Reviewed By: jettwolf90 On: December 18, 2003 20:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this is one of your loyal fan! THIS IS FUNNY! Please write more!!
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Title: love it love it!!!!!!
Reviewed By: wildgirl4560 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 18:46 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL i love it the last chapters ending was soo funny "sexy beast calling shaggy mutt. shaggy do u read me?" i love it keep writing
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2003 22:20 EST
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^-^ im proud of u!!! i dunno u but still! this is a really good story and i really want u 2 write more!!! ur on my favorites list, and i love the laser tag idea!!! this story is funny! i wonder who's gonna win this challenge...
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Reviewed By: Katina108 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2003 22:09 EST
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I love this fic!! it's wonderful!! I can't wait till you update again!!
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Reviewed By: BabayBunny aka BB On: December 17, 2003 12:31 EST
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LOL that sounds like fun. I wanna play Laser tag...*drools* fun. I like paintball fights!!! THOSE are good...and they hurt... I love Miroku he is such a leach and a silly one to boot. Sexy Beast!? That was priceless...Shaggy Mutt never should have let him pick the names.LOL. I have one question...How short IS Shippo in this story? He is supposed to be younger then them but not by THAT much...How could Kagome pick him up and hand him over to Sango? She got more strength then I thought...or is shippo a midget? Anyways Update please i love this story and cant wait to see what happens next.
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Title: Yeah!
Reviewed By: Aewies [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 22:13 EST
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Finally update!!! Hooray!!! Do you know how much I love your story? woo hoo!!
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Reviewed By: zuppy70 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 19:10 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love your story!!! Sexy Beast and Shaggy Mutt, thats good!!! XD I love your story!!!! Its so funny and really original!!! Update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Ahrima [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 18:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another excellent chapter. You're spelling and grammer is consitantly your worst point. It isn't bad, it's just not perfect. You have a fair amount of mistakes. I like the way the plot is developing, although it seems a little slow. It's still a fun fic to read, though. I greatly enjoy the way you write the interactions (conflict) between Kagome and Inuyasha. The way you had Kagome attacked by the press is intriguing. I don't think I've ever seen that done before.
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Title: Ha ha ha ha
Reviewed By: farrel-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 16:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you really need to update more often. I waited forever for you to add a new chapter. I cant wait to see how the laser tag challange turns out though. good work, keep it up
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 16:09 EST
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lol poor shippo! him n bob seem to be having fun tho. laser tag is awesome! i played n came in 21 out of 26..lol o well so i suck its still fun. luv this story n love the length of ur chapters. keep up the good work =D lol shaggy mutt..
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 15:28 EST
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heh heh heh heh!!!! Laser Tag~!!!!
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Reviewed By: Laura-chan (too lazy to login) On: December 16, 2003 08:55 EST
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I need to read more! That's just great!
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