| "The Girl and the Band" Reviews/Comments [ 454 ] |
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Title: OMG....IT'S A MIRACLE
Reviewed By: LottaLuvGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 22:22 EST
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YOUR BACK!!!!!!!!!I still love ur story :) It's the best,and still will be the best...I love u...*hugs you*...ty for updating ^______^ :D... *mumbles something about needing her medicine*
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 17:11 EST
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YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY AN UPDATE! Hohohohoho fluff you say? Hee hee hee Who doesn't love fluff?! LOVE this story! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Ahrima [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 16:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You get another review, hooray for you! You're spelling was a bit worse in this chapter, like a Word spell chack gone bad. You had a lot of words replaced by similar ones. But, even worse, you misspelled a character's name. Inuyasha's elder brother is Sesshoumaru. Not Shessomaru. Other than that, it was very good. The plan is to make Kagome join the band, Miroku heard her singing in the shower. I eagerly await the next chapter. ~Ahrima
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Reviewed By: Milady On: December 02, 2003 16:00 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! This is so good... You got to update soon...
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: December 02, 2003 15:12 EST
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np! it was a good chapter! ur a great author. keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Yoraeryu (Not signed in again...) On: December 02, 2003 10:54 EST
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You know, I was just beginning to lose faith in you... But I understand. School does sap out all your strength for really IMPORTANT things... I will not kill you today. Maybe if you can TRY and give us all a Chistmas present, then I might be able to forgive you. I'm WAITING, Chase-sama! ^^ Disappoint me again and you WILL suffer. Count on it.
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Reviewed By: the quiet one [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 08:40 EST
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Oh wow! That was great! I almost cried when I saw this story on the main list. I am so happy! I love you! I'm a junior and I know you can write more, so please do!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 07:53 EST
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I wanna see Inuyasha torture her! I will have a talk with your teachers how about that?
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 00:31 EST
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Oh, I really wish I knew what the plan is. Maybe it has something to do with the locks??? Hmmmm, anyway thank you for updating I was beginning to give up hope and I really like this story! So please, please, please update soon!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lady Kagome On: November 27, 2003 23:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon!!!!!!! I love this story. Make a chapter where Sango, Miroku, and Shippo go out, and leave Kagome and Inuyasha alone. PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Title: *ATTACKS*
Reviewed By: Siyin_AnimeFanGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 03:44 EST
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COME ON ITS BEEN FOREVER YOU NEED TO UPDATE PLEZ!!! OR WE SHALL CONTINUE PESTERING YOU!!!!
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Reviewed By: lil italy On: November 24, 2003 19:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this fan fic but i noticed that you haven't updated for a while. i really would like for this one to be finished, it is such a good story. please update.write me and keep me updated mt=y mail is lilladyana@yahoo.com. really good story!!!!!
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Title: Love it!!!!
Reviewed By: Aewi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2003 07:02 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really really really love your story. Yeah it's a romantic comedy...very sweet ^_^ Please update!!!
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Reviewed By: Ahrima [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 21:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Here is the full review. I'll start with the easy stuff. Your grammar and spelling have occasional mistakes, but nothing that interferes with the story. You have an engaging style that makes your story easy and fun to read, and presents the story well. Speaking of the story, your plot is very original. I don't think I've ever seen that done before, and I've read hundreds and hundreds of Inuyasha fanfics. You created a good atmosphere, I don't know how. Also, you have an excellent mix of seriousness, fluff, and humor. You are keeping the characters in character well, a major accomplishment for an AU fic. However, you are taking some liberties with character development. While not necessarily a bad thing, it needs to be done carefully. And, most importantly of all, your story has that indefinable "something" that makes it fun to read, which is what makes me willing to spend the time reading the story, and writing this review. ~Ahrima
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Reviewed By: Ahrima (Ahrima@Mail2Hell.com) On: November 22, 2003 22:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is a very good story. Please don't let it die. Anyway, it's great, but I've been reading for forever, and am exhausted. If I remember, I'll write a more thorough reveiw tomorrow.
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