| "Shelter" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 10:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I'm a rabid Kag/Inu fan, but if I'd have to choose a alternate pairing as my fav, it would be Kag/Kou, spelling, grammer, style were all great. Originality...well, the premise of Kagome being in heat, and being rejected by Inuyasha, is overdone, so...yeah. And enjoyment. Again, I'm a Kag/Inu fan. The lemon was very well written, and the repitition was effective. So overall, a great one-shot.
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Title: Shelter
Reviewed By: Fanged Armadillo On: April 12, 2005 10:34 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Comment/Review:
It's pretty funny when someone who is advising others they are too young to read his fanfictions can't even spell the word immature. This fellow must be pretty "inmature" himself. And Every Word Of A Sentence Shouldn't Be Capitalised, Either. Learn the language! You may not be able to spell immature, but can you spell DENSE!?
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Reviewed By: Darkness Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 13:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
1 sec -changes kagomes name to eiki[i-key] (my nickname) ok im back, i wanna know what happens with inu, she could always do it with him to and pretend the baby belongs to inu.....cuz kouga belongs to me.....well your story you decide just a suggestion but make another chapter! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kary Asakura and Mimi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 18:29 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kary: can u write more please I love it
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 18:34 CST
Comment/Review:
You should really tell us what happens with Inu Yasha after this... it was a pretty ok ficcie!
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Reviewed By: angel0fs0rr0w666 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 14:43 CST
Comment/Review:
uh, yeah, you were right... interesting encounter............. can i ask what happenes to Inu Yasha after that little intimate moment?
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Reviewed By: Lady Fang On: September 23, 2003 16:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love it! Can't get enough Kouga/Kagome pairings anymore. Very good descriptions. Write another one!
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