| "Unbreak My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: DDA [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 19:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is like, So COOL!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter.
|
Title: awww...I want more!!! XD
Reviewed By: myshachan On: September 18, 2005 15:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, Let me just start off by saying that this is one of the best YST fanfics I have read in a while. I really enjoyed this fic thus far, and I am really, really, really, really hoping you will update it soon with more chapters...I wanna know what happens next!!!! :D Keep up the good work ^_^
|
Reviewed By: FirecatRekka On: June 25, 2004 14:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Just wanted to let you know how much I like this story. Hopefully, you'll continue it. I want to see how it ends.
|
Title: OH MY GODS!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: SplitPersona On: February 28, 2004 05:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kathrine: WHY DIDN'T YOU EMAIL US?!!!!!! WE WOULD HAVE READ THIS SOONER!!!!! JC: We hardly ever read MMOrg ANYMORE!!!! No good stories left! But you UPDATED!!!!! YAY!!!!! Kathirne: Now we can tell you how great this chapter was! Poor Shu, not. More angst! JC: And Seiji's going to get married?! NO!!!!!!!!!!!! Kathrine: HE'S MINE!!!!! I WILL fight for him!! JC: And it's been sooo long since this update. I can't wait for what you put up next. And the letter that G-F Date sent Seiji. Kathrine: We at least need to know the reason why Seiji left Shu. It's only fair. JC: We've posted chapter one and two of our Shu/Seiji fic at Fanfiction.Net under Split Persona. MMOrg isn't letting us post things for some reason. We're trying to fix that. Kathrine: So check it out if you want, there's even a lemon in the first chapter. ~_^ JC: MORE SOON PLEASE!!!!!
|
Title: wicked!
Reviewed By: feelINFATUATION On: October 16, 2003 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
really good work. i enjoy the emotion behind seiji and the overall premise is original and very sweet. can't wait to read more!
|
Reviewed By: Split Persona-The Ones and Onlies [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2003 08:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kathrine: As I say, if ya can't go physical, go with emotional.
JC: You just like seeing Seiji crying.
Kathrine: Too much control isn't healthy. Crying is good, plus I like seeing Seiji in pain period. He thrives off of it. ^_^
JC: You scare me sometimes. Anyway, this chapter was great. We like how Seiji actually has someone he can turn to in his family.
Kathrine: We love Satsuki and the thought of hurt trying to slice up he grandfather makes us proud. But I can show how to REALLY make it hurt. ^_~
JC: We're glad our email made you feel better...even though it made you cry first.
Kathrine: It made us feel better to write so I guess it did some good both ways.
JC: Hope you feel better, update as soon as you can. ^_^ And we got a thank for SHU!!!! *Laughs sillily* |
Reviewed By: Split Persona-The Ones and Onlies [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 14:35 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kathrine: This is sooo great! You have to keep going!
JC: We love this story. Shu is now a wreck and everyone will think that Seiji is a bastard. But how will you torture Seiji?
Kathrine: Is he's gone I could help you with that department. We just LOVE to torture Seiji.
JC: Yeah, we do enjoy doing things to him. And we like Satsuki so it's cool that you have her in here.
Kathrine: She's the only member of the family that we never make evil an homophobic and won't. From what we've read about her she's not the type person to be so closed minded.
JC: Now you KNOW we can't wait for the next chapter. And thanks to you we're actually getting ready to post one of our own ShuxSeiji stories.
Kathrine: One where Seiji is not suicidal which is a shock, but he might just die anyway which is also a shock to most because we've never killed him before.
JC: The only Trooper we've killed is Shu, strange. But he did come back to life, well Seiji brought him back to life. What a coincidence. Isn't this all about ShuxSeiji? *Winks*
Kathrine: Well, we better get to typing if we want it ready by tomorrow. Ja! |
Reviewed By: Life the Fay *Too Lazy to sign in* On: July 19, 2003 14:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting! I usally don't like other pairings either than SeijixTouma but since I liked the song, I began to read it and so...I like it! Not many stories of SeijixShu in it...or is it ShuxSeiji. *shrugs* Anyways, keep it up! Cuz you can't leave that bad of a cliffhanger...can you? Or so I think that's a cliffhanger... |
