| "Links of Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: i agree with none of your buesness
Reviewed By: fuck you On: April 29, 2005 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
give you a 0 in everything if i could cause damn i hate it
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Reviewed By: Anouk On: April 13, 2004 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing story! Once I read the first chapter I just couldn't stop! Well done! How about a sequel? ;)
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Reviewed By: Jill Val;entine On: October 17, 2002 10:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story, Thanks for staying true to the characters. :)
Continuation any time soon? |
Reviewed By: none of your buisness On: September 22, 2002 11:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
YOU SUCK!!!!!!!this story is so stupid. |
Reviewed By: Mystic_blue [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2002 01:05 CST
Comment/Review:
Hi! Well nice story and everything, and I am a v/b fan! Very realistic..but a thing annoy's me at the back of my head. Who would he have choosen proabably Fhazha as you said not for v/b fans but didn't it end for v/b fans? When I think about it it is like with Yamcha and Vegeta. |
Reviewed By: incite On: December 31, 2001 18:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is very good and well written. none of the characters are out of character i believe which is an excellent thing btw...oh and this is the best story that i've read that consisted of a saiyan woman that was betrothed to vegeta. in some other fanfics, they always have the beautiful saiyan woman from the past here to claim vegeta back, and in the process, they are totally cruel to bulma and/or vegeta just doesn't care about what bulma thinks, and so on...but in your story, you stay true to the characters and keep the story from being blown out of porportion. i must say that this is the best story of its kind that i've EVER read. like the others asked...is there a continuation in store? |
Reviewed By: anonymous On: September 01, 2001 15:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Overall, not a bad piece, but the grammar mistakes, especially at the beginning, are rather distracting. You may want to go back over your files and clean up the technical writing at some point. |
Reviewed By: rayofshine On: October 02, 2001 10:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is a great story. It's unlike anything I've read so far. Thanks for staying true to the characters, especially Vegeta and his relationship with Bulma. |
Reviewed By: Lady Kitana On: October 03, 2001 18:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thanks it was a wanderfoul story, but what about a continuation. We want a continuation. PLEASE. thanks |
Reviewed By: ssj6rich On: November 11, 2001 22:31 CST
Comment/Review:
This was the best story I ever read, I mean it!!!!
Please write a contunuation or a seqal.
PPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEE. |
