| "Bakura's Sister" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Reviewed By: punkSESHOUMARU/Rinrocker On: November 24, 2003 17:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seto and Usagi Luv your story, by the way!
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Reviewed By: unknown414 On: November 24, 2003 17:57 CST
Comment/Review:
seto/usa(maybe a lemon)
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Reviewed By: Nessa the dark mage she-elf On: November 16, 2003 06:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!!! oh and i vote for Usa/Seto. they so belong with each other. well keep up the GREAT work.
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Title: anime angel1
Reviewed By: anime angel1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2003 22:17 CST
Comment/Review:
Lovely!please make a Marik/Usa
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Reviewed By: Lily_the_Sugar_Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2003 12:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey I think its a kawaii fanfic and you should make it Usa/Hikari Malik^_~ I've never seen that pairing and I think it would be kawaii^_~ anyway please keep writing^_~ its a great fic and i almost smashed my computer when I found out I ran out of chapters^^' anyway keep up the good work^_~ ~Lily~
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Reviewed By: tsukix33 On: October 27, 2003 18:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! awesome! could you make it a seto/usa fic?? update soon!
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Reviewed By: YugiohNicole@aol.com On: October 11, 2003 02:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice! Hope to see Set/Usa
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Reviewed By: Immrotal_hunter [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 18:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
MERIK ALL THE WAY!! |
Reviewed By: uni On: August 19, 2003 01:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No idea who her dad is but please wright more soon.
Uni |
Reviewed By: kaoru On: August 18, 2003 06:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
can we vote for dark magicienxusa? *_____*
never think to put usagi with a duel monster, but with dark magicien who hug usagi... *_*
i's i can vote for them then i vote for hikari malik/usa or seto/usa and bakura/ryou
usagi is not 100% humain? O.o
... don't tell me usagi is 50% duel monster and his brother is the dark magicien? |
Reviewed By: uni On: August 14, 2003 01:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is the best fic I have read so far.
please don't stop now not right in the middel.
uni
oh i forgot in chapter 10 you spoke of the first
volume of the Yu-Gi-Oh! graphic novel right do you
know where you can get volume 2! uni |
Reviewed By: uni On: August 12, 2003 03:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I relly relly like this fic. I don't care if you put
in the lemon piece. I probably won't be abel to read
it becuse my stuped computer won't lode any of the
chaps in your fic. but keep on wrighting. K ^_^
uni |
Reviewed By: Evanisty20 On: August 01, 2003 14:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My girlfriend has a point you should put in your lemon piece.. It would do nicely. I do have to agree your story is good and I'll keep on reading the story when i can as long as we don't get clients for her books at our door Keep up the great work. ;) |
Reviewed By: Evanisty20 On: August 01, 2003 14:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My girlfriend has a point you should put in your lemon piece.. It would do nicely. I do have to agree your story is good and I'll keep on reading the story when i can as long as we don't get clients for her books at our door Keep up the great work. ;) |
Reviewed By: Anemos15 On: August 01, 2003 14:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright down to the piont. I am an author and review other people to encourage them in all kinds of writings with all sorts of ideas and I believe that you should put in the lemon. Don't worry i'm not an old kook kind of author I'm 19 anemos is my writimg name for looking at other stories and 15 stands for how old I was to start writing. And I blieve that you are doing great. I'll even have my boyfriend R&R next. You are doing great so add the lemon piece in and I'm sure you'll have more R&R's. Keep up the great work. :) |
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