| "Bakura's Sister" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Reviewed By: uni On: August 19, 2003 01:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No idea who her dad is but please wright more soon.
Uni |
Reviewed By: kaoru On: August 18, 2003 06:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
can we vote for dark magicienxusa? *_____*
never think to put usagi with a duel monster, but with dark magicien who hug usagi... *_*
i's i can vote for them then i vote for hikari malik/usa or seto/usa and bakura/ryou
usagi is not 100% humain? O.o
... don't tell me usagi is 50% duel monster and his brother is the dark magicien? |
Reviewed By: uni On: August 14, 2003 01:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is the best fic I have read so far.
please don't stop now not right in the middel.
uni
oh i forgot in chapter 10 you spoke of the first
volume of the Yu-Gi-Oh! graphic novel right do you
know where you can get volume 2! uni |
Reviewed By: uni On: August 12, 2003 03:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I relly relly like this fic. I don't care if you put
in the lemon piece. I probably won't be abel to read
it becuse my stuped computer won't lode any of the
chaps in your fic. but keep on wrighting. K ^_^
uni |
Reviewed By: Evanisty20 On: August 01, 2003 14:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My girlfriend has a point you should put in your lemon piece.. It would do nicely. I do have to agree your story is good and I'll keep on reading the story when i can as long as we don't get clients for her books at our door Keep up the great work. ;) |
Reviewed By: Evanisty20 On: August 01, 2003 14:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My girlfriend has a point you should put in your lemon piece.. It would do nicely. I do have to agree your story is good and I'll keep on reading the story when i can as long as we don't get clients for her books at our door Keep up the great work. ;) |
Reviewed By: Anemos15 On: August 01, 2003 14:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright down to the piont. I am an author and review other people to encourage them in all kinds of writings with all sorts of ideas and I believe that you should put in the lemon. Don't worry i'm not an old kook kind of author I'm 19 anemos is my writimg name for looking at other stories and 15 stands for how old I was to start writing. And I blieve that you are doing great. I'll even have my boyfriend R&R next. You are doing great so add the lemon piece in and I'm sure you'll have more R&R's. Keep up the great work. :) |
Reviewed By: bunny On: July 29, 2003 09:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic! update soon! i'd like to see seto and usa together. |
Reviewed By: Princess Star Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 21:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Where did Phanthom get that card from??? When did Pegasus make a Sailor Moon series Duel Monster card? |
Reviewed By: adb On: July 23, 2003 17:57 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i read the one you have posted on FF.net. I like it. can you please add the lemon for this site? and pair her up with Seto. If you do anyone else it's have to be a threesome. |
Reviewed By: blue moon On: July 22, 2003 13:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this fic! i agree with "VelvetUnderworld", don't worry about what "Marik" said. keep up the good work! i would actually like to see serenity and seto together b/c there aren't many fics w/ them together. |
Reviewed By: Saris Yui On: July 21, 2003 12:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I as well enjoyed this story too froget what that other guy said Marik since you asked I would like to see yami and serenity together both royal backrounds and it works out that way just make seto a best friend can't wait for more!
JA'NE |
Reviewed By: VelvetUnderworld On: July 21, 2003 01:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
it was actually quite good. I read the reviews first, b4 reading the story and 2 tell the truth after reading wut "Marik" said, i wasnt too thrilled of reading ur story. however as i began 2 read it, i found it enjoyable, so "Marik" i dunno wut was up w/ wut u said. it's true that some things arent perfect here and cud use a lil fixing but not everything has to b perfect to b good. well, thats my opinion anywayz. ill wait 4 next chapters, so keep up writing. C'ya laterzzz |
Reviewed By: Yoshimi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! i can't wait for more! I would like to see the lamon chapter. |
Reviewed By: silverkitty On: July 22, 2003 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plze write more!!! i love a fanfic crossover w/ YuGiOh. i want more romance please. i like Usagi to pair up with Yami or Seto. Plus write longer. |
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