| "Love, a glitch between myself and you.." Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: A long time ago
Reviewed By: Lexy*Inuyasha lover On: October 22, 2004 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey...I know it's been around like a long time since you wrote this but I just thought that I should tell you that your story isn't bad at all! Sure I really didn't like it whenever Inuyasha did that to Kagome but at the end of your last chapter I did like the way that he held her and another thing that I didn't like was that hot Sesshomaru(Sesshy)was making love to stupid Kykyo! But as you explained he wants Kagome...so I'm happy! I really wish you would have finished.
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Title: luved it!
Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heyy!!! I loved your story!! Can you please update!!!! I like your character. I HATE KIKYO!! THAT FUCKIN ASSHOLED BITCH!! *gasps* sorry for mah words that i use. But Sesshomaru.. that was funny the way Kikyo said that she didn't want to be with him then Sesshomaru forced the words out of her mouth. If you ask me... Kikyo and Sesshomaru make a good couple for this story..at the REAL episodes Kikyo would look good with ... hmm....uh...!! Ooh! ooh!! i know...no one!! lol or Naraku..eaither way but NOT Inu...inu/kag rock forever!!!! Anyways sorry about mah blabber i juss here to say i luved your story and that you should update cuz you neva updated in around one year!!! PLEASE!!!! with sugar on top!! Anyways buhbye!! ~Angela
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Reviewed By: me On: March 10, 2004 16:59 CST
Comment/Review:
i know you dont get much support, but i support you!!! your story is awesome!!!!WAY better than i could do!!!!!!i like your character too and i'm glad that inuyasha finally saw through kikyo!!!!DIE KIKYO, YOU BITCH!!!!!!(i dont like her much) i'll try to review every time you update!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Relix On: February 15, 2004 18:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Come on.. continue!
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Reviewed By: Crimson R. On: September 22, 2003 19:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like it. Please write more! I like complete fics but this one is still really good. Please finish it ASAP! Thanks! -Crim
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Reviewed By: .:.LizziE.:. On: August 11, 2003 04:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv this fic update soon! oh and @ the beginning of a sentance sometimes there is no first word |
Reviewed By: Grammar Police! On: July 21, 2003 19:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
umm i like ur story...but i HIGHLY suggest u ask sumone to proof read it or u proof read it urself b4 u post it becuz theres alotta mispelled words and sum of ur sentences dont even make sense. i dont mean to flame u or anything cuz i do like ur story and all but u really need to re-read it b4 u type it up. and also theres alotta parts i didnt understand...in one paragraph kagome didnt even kno who inuyasha was and then in tha next shes like really good friends wit shippo and inu...how did that happen?? o well just make sure u proof read it at least once. sorry again! >. |
Reviewed By: ChUNky LuVeR [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow a new twist! Your chapter should have more spaces! |
Reviewed By: Inuyashas_woman^_^ On: July 20, 2003 16:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
sorry i noticed a few spelling errors in my first review...¬_¬'...i meant "--a few parts--" sorry! >. |
Reviewed By: Inuyashas_woman^_^ On: July 20, 2003 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ur fic is good! ^_^ keep goin wit it! theres a few pats u need to explain more...like at tha end of chapter 1 how did Kagome kno he was a dog demon?? o well maybe its just me bein stupid o well! update soon =D |
Reviewed By: Rin On: July 19, 2003 18:51 CDT
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Cool Fic keep writing |
Reviewed By: Neenuvar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 02:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh my god! I cried so hard! lol. your story is great so far. i hope you update soon. |
