| "Purple" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: TheColorsofSand, just not logged in. On: August 08, 2011 18:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fricken' awesome. You certainly didn't give it away too early, don't worry. |
Reviewed By: Dvana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2005 23:04 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh, that was so wonderfully hot and clever. Hats off to you, dear, I must have read the first line three or four times and still I didn't guess until the very end. ^^ grats on a great story.
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Reviewed By: tsutsuji [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2005 14:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is absolutely my favorite Xel/Zel fic. I love it, especially the ending! Just shows why they're so perfect for each other.
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Reviewed By: Mysteriously Moi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 12:01 EDT
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Bonzai. Hehe, that was unbarabley cute. To me, anyways. Hehe. You honestly had me going at first that it was a rape fic. I don't like those particularly, so I nearly fainted when you chose to triumphantly announce the reality of the whole thing. Huhuhu, clever.
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Title: Colors
Reviewed By: Sweetdeily [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 09:33 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hmmm. This was my first slayers fic (I'm just now watching the second series, so I can't comment on characterization fully of Xellos). Although I have noticed how popular this pairing is before. As for lemony goodness, a little short, but then, it wasn't NC, and most NC are full of the victim's reflections on being raped. As for the little 'after bit' I sorta thought it was a little... well, lame to be honest. It seemed a vain attempt to turn a good NC into a 'play acting' story. I know we all do it, but still. Anyway, as for style of writing, I think some more details would be nice, it's otherwise very clear, very involving. I liked this story. Good job!
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Title: ?_?
Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 16:59 EDT
Comment/Review:
Not bad...I thought it was a rape fic...but there were a few warnings and when I reread it I found more clues... Good job with it though!
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Title: Azure RoseWolfe
Reviewed By: Azure RoseWolfe [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 09:20 EDT
Comment/Review:
I likes it! it is kinda difficult to tell Zel wasn't being raped, but if u'r looking, u can tell. this was really good & i hope u do more like it! Zel/Xellos is my fav pair.
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Reviewed By: Child of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 21:57 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
heh, I love the twist ending! Been so long since I read a x/z fic @_@ Ah well, great job! ^____^
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Title: LOL
Reviewed By: HellsLibrarian On: September 21, 2003 23:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL...LMFAO! OMG You had me going for a while. That's the first time anyone's done that in a long time! That was great! I really enjoyed your fic! Xelloss/Zelgadis all the way! =D
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Reviewed By: Sunatic On: August 03, 2003 13:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Argh, I really thought it was a rape. You had me totally fooled. ^_^ Love the fic. Honestly. And nice idea, Zel and Xel playing roles and using safe words... Goddammit, I just love this fic. |
