| "Latex Blues" Reviews/Comments [ 110 ] |
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Reviewed By: HentaiGoddess On: September 12, 2003 17:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was absolutly taken by this, Please continue!! |
Reviewed By: Inu-samasSlave30 On: September 08, 2003 03:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was well written. The story flowed so well. Not a dull moment..KEEP IT UP!!! |
Reviewed By: J3$$ On: September 05, 2003 10:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It will be awesome if you continue writing it. hehe... Plz! |
Reviewed By: Admiral Biatch On:
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally got to this. Seemed to always not let me through. Must have been some server trouble. Anyway, I enjoyed that. |
Reviewed By: Descent_Into_Insanity [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2003 02:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all, I have to admit, I hardly review on stories whatsoever, but I simply had to compliment you on your style of writing and the entire 'comedy' bit of it all. This was a great fanfic, and I think it can end and be considered completed at chapter 10. ^__^ Great job!
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Descent_Into_Insanity |
Reviewed By: Chri [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2003 04:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi Nanda!
Here's the review I promised you.
I'm bad at finding bad grammar, cause I usually read over it without noticing. I can't remember any, by the way.
Your style of writing was rather simple without fancy words, easy to read, and very fitting for the story. Two things I noticed, a) the almost-rape (or whatever?) scene in chapter seven could have used a bit more character insight; and b) in chapter 10 you could have inserted an additional Enter where you jump from Kagome to IY and Shippou. b) is just nitpicky, the 9 is mostly from a) (I admit that this kinda thing is likely not easy to write).
I think Originality would deserve a 10+. I've never read a lemon like this one (well, I don't read many ;)). First, Inuyasha almost taking her by force to scare other guys away. Then, it was written really well that they are both inexperienced. Their discussion in chap 8 was very good.
The quarrel about the place - bed or floor - was another thing I've never read before. I think Inuyasha had a bit too much self-control in the end of chap 9, but well, there weren't any condoms for him... ;)
The last chapter was a good conclusion (out of the window, LOL) for both Kag and IY.
Anyway, very good story. I'm sure I'll try some other of your stories too, I like your style of writing (this thing is also always personal preference). So the overall rating is a ten, too. :)
Have fun writing,
Chris |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2003 22:31 EDT
Comment/Review:
I wonder if Inuyasha knows that even if he'd done what he wanted to do, it wouldn't have been recieved by other men in quite that manner. I mean, he seems to think that if he sleeps with Kagome, other guys will back off. In the modern era, though, fewer men expect virginity, so even an old-fashioned guy like Hojo might not--
(BONK!)
--ow!
Stop the nitpicking!
It's the voices again! Nooooo!
Yeah! Just let us read! |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2003 22:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I wouldn't class this as a funny 'fic exactly. It seems more angsty to me, but it's a real fun read! |
Reviewed By: Princess Bulma [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 21:39 EDT
Comment/Review:
i bow down to you. i was chokeing when i read "They're too small" i love the story at least tell what happens. |
Reviewed By: shadow demon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 02:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like that it was good. I am going to have a few of my friends read this fic.
Thank You
NightWolf |
Reviewed By: Hope and Harmony On: July 27, 2003 03:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!
This was really good! I must say that that was one of the best written lemons I've ever read. I really enjoyed this.
Great stuff!
Love,
Hope and Harmony |
Reviewed By: Shadow Kat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 20:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved the fic, but u sorta left it as a cliffhanger, oh wel. it was good and u should keepup the good work. |
Reviewed By: Psycho On: July 25, 2003 18:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic because you wrote what other people have been dying to read for a long time. Thank you!! |
Reviewed By: lillithan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 17:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read this before but just had to come back and read it again with a review. This fic was quite funny, and my god I don't think I've blushed so much JUST reading a fic. *Blame it on my overactive imagination* Excellent job! Keep up the good work!
Lil |
Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 16:02 EDT
Comment/Review:
hehehehe.... (i'm laughing like a maniac.f) That was a goodie... |
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